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The Perfect of Dreams
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The Perfect of Dreams |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*The Perfect of Dreams*~ My love... You are my heart And breath which gives me life Breathing you in...I hold you there And dance within the 'perfect' of my dreams Nothing exists beyond your eyes Your touch is my Heaven You...my angel... My love ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohmygosh!! This just about took my breath away! THIS is incredibly beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A very pretty piece. TD |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You've got this hopeless romantic sighing here....what a gorgeous rictameter! Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...take a breath...another...another. Wonderful, romantic writing!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Vicky - you write of romance well... BC |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Vicky~ A masterpiece really. Flows so smooooooth. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, this is absolutely beautiful. You know I love it. It's romantic and a rictameter....  Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Vicky, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I can see you have gotten into the rictameter spirit, yay, it brings me a smile to see these little gems come out from your heart, God Blss You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-14-2003 11:12 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Vicki: I love this! This is one of your best I have seen I adore angels Book this please . . . xxoo (we'll come back) [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-15-2003 01:36 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Bombella Junior Member
since 2003-04-10
Posts 19Western Australia |
Oh this is truly beautiful. I love it!! Cherie.. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Is Tuesday a good day for Perfect Dreams?? I think so...  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Nothing exists beyond your eyes Your touch is my Heaven You...my angel... My love To have felt this, known this even once, is to have lived. Thank you for bringing it here so beautifully. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This... needs a frame! Warm & lovely, heartfelt, and pure... Well done m'friend...  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh, Vicky, this is so wonderful. Gosh, I love this type of poem and just can't seem to write one. You have such a great gift. Hugs for Peace. Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nancy Lee...Thank you so much, my friend. I'm really glad you like it. Hugs and smiles back at you. This Diamond...Thank you. Melissa...THIS hopeless romantic is sighing too. Thanks much, friend. Martie...Thank you, my friend. Breathing deeply here. Big heart hugs to you. Bill...Glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you. Paul...Thank you for 'masterpiece'. So happy you enjoyed. Ethel...Thanks so much, friend. Your replies always make me smile. Hugs to you. Noah...Thank you for the sweet reply. I appreciate you. Sue...I'm really glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for suggesting that I submit it for the book. That means a lot to me, as does this poem. Unfortunately, I am already sufficiently represented in the book and wouldn't feel right submitting another. Thank you again, though...and big hugs to you. Dixie...Thank you. Cherie...Thank you so much. Nan...You KNOW it is. Thank you SO MUCH, friend. And thank you for being such a good friend to me. Great big hugs to you. Ed...Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm happy to know that you enjoyed this one. vadana...Thank you. Karilea...This one will most definitely have a frame, and thank you for thinking it too. This one is very special to me...as is 'he'. Thanks you, friend. Hugs to you. Marti...Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. You've made me smile today. Thanks again, to each of you. Your replies mean more to me than you know. This poem is especially close to my heart. Thank you all for allowing me to share it with you. Great big hugs to all, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-15-2003 02:10 PM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow, Mum, that is beautiful  Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Breathing you in...I hold you there ============================ this moth dont know a rictometer from a parking meter..but I know a poet in love when I see one.  This is just a sigh waiting to happen... lovely lovely poetess Vicky. (will w/b soon) Ocean wrapped around the sun |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Love looks so good on a poet...especially on you my friend...enjoy it to its fullest... hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
"Your touch is my Heaven"... Beautiful I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Just a perfect giddy-o-meter~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So beautifully romantic... this is lovely! *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...sometimes dreams come true...don't they...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I can see you have inhaled love and it sure suits you. It does my heart so good to see you this happy, and here's to love! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and that was "The Perfect of" Rictameters. Lovely, Vicky! Simply, lovely! Warm hugs, Linda |
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