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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-04-14 06:06 PM


Pizza For Dessert

She ask me if I was hungry.
I told her I desired to eat sushi.
She told me that I was sushi.
I said, if I'm sushi then what are you?
She said she was pizza.
Well, let me change that order.
If you're pizza then it's pizza I desire.
She said  allright, then come over
tomorrow night for dinner at nine.
We'll be eating steak and vegetables
and drinking some nice Merlot wine.
What about the pizza that
I desired I inquired.
That's for dessert.
You'll be having
pizza for dessert.

JamesLee
April14
2003


[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (04-16-2003 04:31 AM).]

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KoKo
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1 posted 2003-04-14 06:49 PM


What about the pizza that
I desired I inquired.

This is cute, but watch your spelling.

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2 posted 2003-04-14 09:35 PM




Yes, this is clever. And, I'll betcha dessert comes first!


Enjoyed, hugs, Pat

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scorpio
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3 posted 2003-04-14 10:22 PM


Well done James...very inventive write..

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2003-04-14 10:28 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh James, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, I however would pick many things over pizza anyday, hehehe, think I'll have ceviche for dessert, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2003-04-14 10:32 PM


I like this one.  Joyce
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6 posted 2003-04-14 10:46 PM


So how was it?..typo on your, I think line 7
and there are so many pizza varieties


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7 posted 2003-04-14 11:06 PM


Yeow, nice work! Having fun with love -- a fine thing to do...........!

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8 posted 2003-04-16 10:50 PM


...appetizer AND dessert
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9 posted 2003-04-16 10:53 PM


Witty
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2005-06-29 12:38 PM


Thank you all for the wonderful responses....James
Earl Brinkman
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11 posted 2010-05-19 08:27 AM


I found this clever and entertaining.
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