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Pizza For Dessert

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 04-14-2003 06:06 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Pizza For Dessert

She ask me if I was hungry.
I told her I desired to eat sushi.
She told me that I was sushi.
I said, if I'm sushi then what are you?
She said she was pizza.
Well, let me change that order.
If you're pizza then it's pizza I desire.
She said  allright, then come over
tomorrow night for dinner at nine.
We'll be eating steak and vegetables
and drinking some nice Merlot wine.
What about the pizza that
I desired I inquired.
That's for dessert.
You'll be having
pizza for dessert.

JamesLee
April14
2003


[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (04-16-2003 04:31 AM).]

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KoKo
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1 posted 04-14-2003 06:49 PM       View Profile for KoKo   Email KoKo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KoKo

What about the pizza that
I desired I inquired.

This is cute, but watch your spelling.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
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Yes, this is clever. And, I'll betcha dessert comes first!


Enjoyed, hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
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scorpio
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3 posted 04-14-2003 10:22 PM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

Well done James...very inventive write..

believe in what your heart feels...

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(giggles in delight) Oh James, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, I however would pick many things over pizza anyday, hehehe, think I'll have ceviche for dessert, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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I like this one.  Joyce
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So how was it?..typo on your, I think line 7
and there are so many pizza varieties

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Yeow, nice work! Having fun with love -- a fine thing to do...........!

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...appetizer AND dessert
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Witty
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Thank you all for the wonderful responses....James
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I found this clever and entertaining.
 
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