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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-04-14 04:34 PM



Here I sit in the Sobro Cafe
listening to the notes
reverberating off the walls
of the Country Music Hall Of Fame.
Ghostly echoes serenading the heart
with the strings of the black guitar
caressed by the fingers
of the man dressed in black.

I feel the spirit of the music
in the resonating tones
a mixture of country, gospel and blues.
It speaks to me of Elvis,
the King of rock and roll;
and his gold Cadillac, his gyrating hips.
It whispers of the mellow voices
of Jim Reeves and Eddie Arnold.

I hear the heartbreaking tales
of love gone wrong, the joyful notes
of love recaptured, of love yearned for,
of love only dreamed about.
I see those pearly gates
in the soulful rendition
of 'Mansion Over The Hilltop,' and I think
that God must look down and smile.

Yet if these walls could speak,
I think they would speak through
the exquisite tones coaxed into being
with the strings of the black guitar
strummed by this man dressed in black.
And, I think this time and this place
would be about the closest thing there is
to being in a Country Heaven.



© Copyright 2003 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2003-04-14 04:45 PM


Oh, this one is near and dear to my heart and just went into a special place in my library!!!!!  I played music for many years, in just that sort of place, and your wonderful write brought back some great memories.  I thank you!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-04-14 09:52 PM


Ivy Rose - dressed in black was our dress when the band played. Great write...

BC

Larry C
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3 posted 2003-04-14 11:03 PM


Ivy Rose,
I bet you're right! Good write that was fun to read.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-04-14 11:15 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Every July I always go out to see my grandparents in the summer, and they always take me to this beautiful country music hall called the Little Ol' Opry in Jackson, Missouri, where you can dance and play music, and this summer I want to get on stage and play along as I too tear up thinking of the legends! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-04-15 01:32 AM


Ivy:

this is brilliant!
Now me being a die-hard Hendrix freak
I do love the old country:
Patsy Cline, Loretta Lynne,
Waylon & Willie . . .

This reminded me of "Coal Miners Daughter"
xxoo  

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-04-15 03:47 AM


wonderful!
Justbleu
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7 posted 2003-05-12 05:02 PM


I very much enjoyed this....
I was there with you seeing and listening!!!!Wonderful!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-05-12 05:10 PM


Ivy Rose, I myself like Soft Rock and New Country better, but I have a friend who absolutely loves this kind of music. She is crazy about Conway Twitty. She is a member here, so I'm sending her this link and I'm sure she will leave you a comment.

By the way, I love Elvis music, too.
Hugs,
Ethel

vandana
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9 posted 2003-05-12 07:05 PM


nice write
NewEnglandlazurlu
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10 posted 2003-05-12 07:13 PM


I'm not much of a country music fan, but I did enjoy this write very, very much.

I'm more of a Broadway Show tune gal.

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-05-12 08:26 PM


Ivy Rose, stand up and be counted! That was one fine piece of Americana writing!

I always wanted to go to the Country Music Hall of Fame and I greatly appreciate you taking me there!!!

Big hugs!
EA

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2003-05-12 09:06 PM


So authentic in the delivery of these fine notes, and musical marvels. Paled only to the heart that writes the tribute. Nicely done. TD
Connel
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13 posted 2003-05-12 09:14 PM


Music has the power to lift us off our feet, and your poem knocked me off my seat! Awsome write! I enjoyed this extremly. Thanks for sharing.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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