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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-04-14 04:02 PM


I feel like I am
Second in your heart
Because the day before
I can't get online
For a couple days
You decide to spend time apart

Everytime this happens
You decide to play games
With friends
And I feel like I have been
Ditched for the day

I keep telling you
How bad this makes me feel
But you let it go in one ear
And out the other

It is like
I am not worth
Being listened to
But I guess
I have to get used to it
Or learn to
Ignore my feelings

I feel like I am
Second place in your heart
I guess that is
All I shall be.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2003-04-14 06:15 PM


How many times we question where we stand..
And yet, when we listen to the churning in our own hearts, we realize the gift as we were intended to always be. TD

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2 posted 2003-04-14 11:10 PM


Hard to imagine.....guy must be an idiot...

You have a knack for being flatly honest without losing the flow of the lyric, or diminishing the drama in your presentation. I like that very much.

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garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-04-14 11:15 PM


Hi Julie  
It's good to see you. I haven't seen you
very much lately. Hope all is well.

This poem is sad, though it's written well.
Heart Hugs to you,
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-04-14 11:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I hope all is alright with your sweetheart, dearest friend, I hope he is listening to you as I wish for your heart to be played by ear, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
5 posted 2003-04-15 12:16 PM


You'll always be first in my heart Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-04-15 03:48 AM


bittersweet write
vandana
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7 posted 2003-04-15 10:32 AM


enjoyed
KristieSue
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8 posted 2003-04-15 12:41 PM


wow...bluntly honest!

great job

how is the internet situation going??

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
9 posted 2003-05-12 05:13 PM


I sure hope things improve for you soon!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


vandana
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10 posted 2003-05-12 07:04 PM


enjoyed
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