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Neeraja
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0 posted 2003-04-14 02:24 PM



A BIT RUSTY

Singing birds and budding trees
a scratching dog…
he must have flees
Children playing their voices loud
stored up energy
has to come out
I know this poem
doesn’t make sense
but let me say something
to my defence
I haven’t been rhyming
for quite a while
the reason was simple
I lost my smile
Finding it back
was not so easy
So please take this poem not serious
I still feel…. a bit rusty!


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1 posted 2003-04-14 02:34 PM


Very nicely done Neeraja!
And you don't seem rusty at all..
Come on lets see you smile!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-04-14 05:10 PM


this is nicely done!
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3 posted 2003-04-14 11:48 PM




(smiles) Oh Neeraja, you're not rusty at all, I believe the best poetry always comes from the heart and sometimes I rhyme, sometimes I don't, but I put my feelings as first priority! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-04-15 02:04 AM


cute, I enjoyed
Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-04-15 06:43 AM



Well get that oil can
and lubricate those hinges...
you're back now...
we'll be your interim,
until you are once again...

smiling.

Dreamer@
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6 posted 2003-04-15 07:01 AM


Smile !

Enjoy the sunshine in your heart cause you have just opened it up again.

But nor the less never feel that down that you cant smile cause it heals the soul in bad days.

Dreamer


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7 posted 2003-04-15 08:29 AM


I'm glad to see you smiling again, glad to meet you...and think that was very cute!!!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Justbleu
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8 posted 2003-05-12 05:09 PM


I hope your smile sticks around awhile....
I love this!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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