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since 2002-02-13
Posts 93
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0 posted 2003-04-14 02:15 PM




The first time I saw you,
It was just a passing glance
The next thing I knew
We were sharing a dance

I don’t know what came over me
But I went for our first kiss
Being with you made me so happy
And my night was full of bliss.

From that moment on I knew you were unique
I wanted to be around you constantly
But of the things that happened we would rarely speak
And what I didn’t know was the decision lay with me.

Everyone around us knew what was taking place
But neither of us could read
What was written on our face,
The unbelievable lust, the incredible need

The week that brought an end
To the months of uncertainty
Was when I realised you weren’t my friend
That you meant so much more to me.

I feel so special that you’re with me,
To feel your skin next to mine
I’m thankful this came to be
For this is our special time.

Each time I think of you I feel the beat of my heart
To which you own every minute part
So anytime that you feel blue
Remember my overwhelming love for you.



© Copyright 2003 Clare Griffiths - All Rights Reserved
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
1 posted 2003-04-14 02:25 PM


Every time is a lot isn't it? Good write!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-04-16 04:33 AM


Enjoyed...James
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-04-30 01:56 PM


A beautiful outpouring of love.....
Very nice!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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