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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-04-14 11:11 AM

I want to touch you,
so softly,
that my lips tremble,
in whispering breathes
caressing the hairs
of your desires.
In swirling motions
almost touching,
erotic sensations.

Velvet fingers,
satin smooth,
melting sensations,
arousing you.

Rose petals
on silken sheets,
sensual fragrances
in hypnotic candlelight.

Slow moves,
joining as one,
forming intertwining needs
enveloping our fantasies.

In intimate words,
the heavens open up,
in stars becoming so brilliant,
as to make this night
a pure treasure
in flaming pleasure.

D.Lester Young (04/14/03)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (04-14-2003 10:44 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-04-14 05:52 PM

Vividly expressive. ThisDiamond

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-04-14 06:52 PM

Oh my...need to breathe here...This is absolutely beautiful! You captured this sooooo terrifically! Wonderful job here, you have my vote

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

[This message has been edited by KoKo (04-14-2003 06:53 PM).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2003-04-14 09:36 PM

You've got my applause and vote! This is most beautiful in it's sensuality!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-04-14 09:43 PM

Lovely. you may want to change pedals to petals. Joyce

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-04-14 09:44 PM

D.Lester Young - goodness, this is erotic, sensual, explanatiously lovely...

BC

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-04-14 10:16 PM

Passion and desire wrapped in softness and beauty. This was wonderful.

-Patricia

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-04-14 11:44 PM

....I'd say you handled this one really well....

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-04-14 11:53 PM

(smiles) Yay! This is sooooooo snesually beautiful, sweet friend, this is bound to make your sweetheart's heart melt in an instant, yay, this boils with such passion straight from your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bombella
Junior Member

since 2003-04-10

Posts 19
Western Australia

9 posted 2003-04-14 11:54 PM

So sensual and expressive. You get my vote!
Cherie..

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-04-15 03:28 PM

Sensual and beautiful... you expressed these thoughts VERY well. *S*

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2003-04-15 03:32 PM

How did you do it??? I marvel at the way you found the words to describe how I feel when my love is near...well done!!

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-04-15 05:05 PM

You put this one together sensually nice...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2003-04-15 05:08 PM

Wonderful..gets my vote!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

14 posted 2003-04-15 05:20 PM

D. Lester....This is very sensous, very passionate. Describes the feeling of love and desire so well. Wonderful imagery throughout. You have my vote. ***Ivy Rose

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

15 posted 2003-04-15 07:27 PM

Sensually beautiful...you have my vote.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2003-04-15 09:01 PM

Lester:

may this piece of heaven live forever
within binding . . .

the heavens open up,
in stars becoming so brilliant,

xxoo

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

17 posted 2003-05-04 09:03 AM

This is so sensual, so beautiful!

You have my vote!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

18 posted 2003-05-04 09:17 AM

A very artful and passionate style...

A Real Gem!

So nicely done,

Richy

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