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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2003-04-14 07:09 AM





The morning sun is dancing on your handsome sleeping face
A smile is left there from the night before
I touch your hair, you touch my hand, my heart begins to race
And in that moment, I am sure
I couldn't ask for more...

What more could I accomplish if I didn't have you there?
No, money wouldn't be the magic cure
I'd still be out there searching...lost...not getting anywhere
I've got it all within my grasp
I've never been more sure...

So here I'll sit so quietly, and watch you as you dream
And say a prayer of thanks to God above
For giving me a chance to know what joy in life can mean
I couldn't ask for more
I've got it all here in your love...

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-14 07:36 AM



Good morning Sun-Sis..
now you know, this pleased me
so very, very much...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-04-14 07:58 AM


Sunnyone
A lovely read and written well.

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-04-14 10:30 AM


Good morning to you, Sun-sis, and I'm glad I could give you some reading pleasure!!!  Thank you!!

Thank you Sy, as this is a special one for my hubby, Music Maker.....I'm glad that you liked it, and was so nice to get your reply!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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4 posted 2003-04-14 11:34 AM


How very beautiful is both this work and the love that inspired it. *S*
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5 posted 2003-04-14 12:56 PM


beautiful!
Neeraja
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6 posted 2003-04-14 02:16 PM


Sigh.... this is so beautiful....

Neeraja

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7 posted 2003-04-14 03:12 PM


Sunnyone...You are lucky to recognize the good thing that you got.  There is much love in your words.  I'm happy for you!
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8 posted 2003-04-14 04:01 PM


sunny...love this...love at it's best...lucky man that music maker...helen
Sunnyone
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9 posted 2003-04-14 04:40 PM


Hi suthern, and thank you! yes, the thoughts here are inspired by what I finally found...after years of feeling alone, it's nice to write from love.

Hi passing shadows, and I accept the happy applause, and say thank you for coming to visit me here today!

Hi Neeraja, and I am so pleased to see you here!!  Thank you!!

Hi Martie, and it's so special when you drop by!  Thank you, my friend!

Hi Helen and thank you...I'll tell him!!! LOL!!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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10 posted 2003-04-14 04:47 PM


(Blushes!!!)   Thank you Darling, and I didn't know you cared!!! LOL.   Your love shines through in so many ways, and I am the luckiest Guy on this planet that you are mine and I am yours.
Lub You - Hubby John (The Music Maker)

Sunnyone
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11 posted 2003-04-14 04:50 PM


Thank you, my love, and all my love poems are for you, you know!!!  ~~kisses to my Music Maker~~  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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12 posted 2003-04-14 04:56 PM


This is beautiful...with perfect graphics for perfect words.
Eric

Sunnyone
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13 posted 2003-04-14 04:57 PM


Hi Ericc and thank you, my friend....the pic just sort of made itself at home here!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

vlraynes
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14 posted 2003-04-14 07:39 PM



Sunnyone~
I absolutely love this...brought a smile
to my face and to my heart.
This is a wonderful place to be and I'm hoping
to be there soon, with the one I love.
I'm glad to know that you have that kind of happiness.
Big hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-14-2003 07:41 PM).]

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15 posted 2003-04-14 07:44 PM


How very very beautiful!
Much enjoyed the read!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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16 posted 2003-04-14 09:50 PM


Sunny - I'm very happy for you, and I wish you only the best as each day goes by...

BC

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17 posted 2003-04-14 11:03 PM




(smiles) Oh Sunnyone, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, this made me cry as I am so happy for you and want all your heart desires to forever sing to you lovingly! (kiss on cheek) I dream for this kind of beauty too as it must feel so gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
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18 posted 2003-04-15 04:14 AM


Hi Vicky, and oh I am so very happy for you! Yes, it is a wonderful feeling to find one you can share your life and love with, and I wish for the very best....big ~~hugs~~  and a thank you, too!

Hi Nancy, and thank you so much! My Music Maker inspired this one, and puts the love into my writing these days!!

Hi BC, and that means a lot to me, as you have known of my long journey to this point, huh?  Thank you, my friend, and God Bless...

Hi Noah, and it is so sweet of you to send me such a lovely wish!!  I send one back to you to find that special love...never give up, because it really is out there!! Thank you, lil bro!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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19 posted 2003-04-15 10:33 AM


enjoyed
garysgirl
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20 posted 2003-04-15 10:55 AM


Sunnyone, you know that I know exactly how you're feeling about this one. I am so happy for you, for I know how it feels to finally find someone who returns the wonderful love that you give. To be loved in the same way as you love someone is such a beautiful gift from God, isn't it?

Best wishes to you and your MusicMaker, Sunnyone.
Hugs to you both  
Ethel.
.
.


(BTW, I went to his webpages yesterday. The music on there is fantastic. I have been to yours before, too. I plan to go back to read and hear more of both of you.)

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21 posted 2003-04-15 01:09 PM


When you have true love, you have it all!

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

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22 posted 2003-04-15 01:39 PM


I am so happy that you are at the place in your life where you "...couldn't ask for more"! You are so worthy of your blessings.

Huggums,
Linda

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23 posted 2003-04-15 01:51 PM


this makes me just want to sit, smile, and listen to each breath. So beautiful, and I'm so glad for you

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

littlewing
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24 posted 2003-04-16 01:02 AM


Sunny
this is beautiful
I do know that feeling
please dont let go of it
xxoo

Sunnyone
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25 posted 2003-04-16 04:31 AM


Hi Vandana, and thank you so much for dropping by...I always enjoy knowing that you have visited me here!!

Hi Ethel, and yes, it is a true gift to find one's dreams, after a lifetime of searching. And MM will be so glad that you enjoyed his music, as that is his life's work.  Here is the new url for the site he put together for our new puppy...you'll like it!  Story of Sara

Hi Liz, and yes...when you have that kind of love, you truly have it all.....my thanks and hugs to you today!!

Hi Linda, and thank you for such a wonderful reply! I'm at a point in my life where I'm realizing how many blessings I have, and one of them is friends like you that I have met here...it means so much!

Hi Alyssa, and thank you, dear friend!  If this makes you smile, than I am very happy too!!!

Hi littlewing, and no......I won't let go!!  It has taken me too long to reach this wonderful plateau, and I'm savoring every moment of every single day.  Thank you so much!




Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (04-16-2003 04:38 AM).]

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26 posted 2003-04-29 01:35 AM


Ooo, this is very nice, very nice....
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27 posted 2003-04-29 10:25 AM


Sunny, thank you  so much  for the link to Sara's Website. That is just delightful. I'm going to send the link to lots of my doglover friends.

Oh, I forgot to sign the guestbook and can't go back right now, but certainly will.

This gave me a good idea for something for me and Gary's Mom to do together. I have my little dog Scooter who is like my child. I've always loved my animals, but he is just like my little boy. He was a year old in December. Anyway, Gary's Mom and Dad own Scooter's Mom and brother. We live next door to each other (now) and Scooter and his brother Buddy play with each other every day. Gary's Dad takes lots of pictures of them together so it would make a very good webpage.

I'm sorry I got so long-winded on your thread, but the site is so cute. Oh, I need to go to bookmark it. I already have yours and Musicmaker's sites bookmarked. Tell him that I love the music on there, too.

Bye for now  
Hugs,
Ethel

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