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To Love Again - Monorhyme Acrostic
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To Love Again - Monorhyme Acrostic |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*To Love Again*~ The past returns, to rid today Of loneliness in love's dismay Look deep within, for what to say One moment lost, too much to pay Verse etched on heart will sure convey Emotions ne'er have gone astray At last, a love need not delay God listened to a heart in pray And through the rain, was shone a ray Inspiring hope that love will stay Now and forever, come what may ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-13-2003 06:39 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hm... Nice Acrostic... Kewl Theme... A-Musing rhyme scheme... Sounds like a fine time to me...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very very nice! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Vickey, So talented you are. Without even realizing the form, the poem is terrific. The two together, I'm very impressed. Enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VickyRaynes~ Do you stay up all night ? Tee-Hee ! Do you know this is BRILLIANT ... ? (not to mention absolutely wonderful) Y ? Because I said so !  Now ... get thee to the playground ! I found a message for you written in the sand !  *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Vicky: exactly - come what may . . . nice write xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...I read happiness in this ...and it sounds so good! Love the form...didn't even realize it was an acrostic until I saw it in someones reply...that's some smooth writing!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A lovely acrostic Vicki and what Martie said.. there's happiness in this. Made me smile enjoyed Maree |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful acrostic Vicky! Much enjoyed the read today! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Vicky~ Just BEAUTIFUL. A little magic from your pin Puts A smile in my heart TO LOVE AGAIN Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Well done, enjoyed. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU I COULD SAY DIRTY WORDS! hahahaha This does my heart good to see you soooo happy!!! love is a good thing my friend...waller in it!!  write some more!!! hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am jumping for joy I am so happy for you too! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (04-14-2003 01:17 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautifully written, Vicky! You are so talented. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, the hope that one will love again. Quite an acrostic! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) This is such a beautiful acrostic, sweet friend, I dream ever so much of getting to make a girl feel special forever and ever and love her with heart, I think so many can relate to this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It may be a very well-written "Monorhyme Acrostic" poem, but it is also one heckova lovely and meaningly write!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful sentiment written beautifully. *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey wait! I know I read this before...where's my response?  Ah...here it is... Great Stuff! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You know I love this  Awwwww (just for you hehe) Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Okay ... so I think it's good enough to be back on page ONE ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Monorhyme Acrostic????? I have my homework cut out for me trying to figure out these different types of poems. Very nice this. Love reading all these great writes. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, I thought I had already replied to this, because I remember reading it when you first posted it. I've been trying to do one of these in rhyme the way you have here, and Lady it is very hard. That's probably why I forgot to reply before. I think I went right to the Poetry Workshop. Anyway, Marge mentioned it to me in her reply to my rictameter and I came to read it again. Now, I really know how hard this was. Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Vicky, I was so enthusiastic over the form that you wrote this in, I didn't even mention how happy I am for you (the content). So this is why Marge said you're "giddy"? Very, very good, sweet lady. Best wishes to you. Heart hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-18-2003 09:25 PM).] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
You nailed a very hard task here this is well crafted |
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