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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-04-13 09:11 PM



P.S.’d

Recently a friend
P.S’d me….

As odd as it could sound…
did my friend mean

           post script
            private satisfaction
             postage stamp

              primal sojourn
               passionate secret
                purple silk

                 primrose scent
                  personally serene…

                   perfectly shipshape
                    pedantically slipshod…

                      poison’s sip
                       perfect symbol…

yet…

it was none of that…
but oddly, how cute all of that
could be…
how functionally persuasive
to place a person subliminally
into what
another might want to
think them to be…

who they are…

but the absolute of it was…
none of the above…

no…wait….

    I’ve perhaps been
        a
           post script
            private satisfaction
             postage stamp

              primal sojourn
               passionate secret
                purple silk

                 primrose scent
                  personally serene…

                   perfectly shipshape
                    pedantically slipshod…

                      poison’s sip
                       perfect symbol…
              
maybe…perhaps…
at one time, or another,
for myself, or one other,
but never, never,
was I the P.S.
that the person believed,
no never, ever, even I believed,
but had I listened, and watched, and want to be?

Oh yes, oh yes…
Indeed….

But only she
and Buddy knew

that I wanted to be…

P     S

~*~

dedicated to the one
who will know…


© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-13 09:21 PM


How enjoyable is this write!!
I have never looked at a P.S. this way before.
Love this Karilea!!
~Smiles & Hugs, hip-sis~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2003-04-13 09:38 PM


Karilea - how I wish my muse could get together with yours! This is awesome! hugs to you my friend, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-04-13 11:36 PM


I have been called PS too--

pretty stupid
    probably sloshed
     plumb silly
       pain in the...
OH.



Oops. See what I mean?

painfully slow






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4 posted 2003-04-14 02:14 AM


hmmm, a fun exploration and quite a bit of thought went into this one, for sure


I thought perhaps someone just wanted to get your attention, similar to "psst"

or maybe s/he was angry, you know, psd!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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5 posted 2003-04-14 02:19 AM


I got...I got! Pretty Sweet.

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6 posted 2003-04-14 03:05 AM


well I've been called PHAT before...and still he had to tell me what that meant, I'm part blonde, you know?

"Pretty Hot And Tempting"


enjoyed the write!

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7 posted 2003-04-14 07:20 AM


I'd say, in your case sister sun, that the PS stood for Pretty Sensational, like this write!!!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (04-14-2003 07:21 AM).]

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8 posted 2003-04-14 07:40 AM


For all of your guesses, my friends...
none of them are right.  

But there is a clue...
it's right there, in front of you!

Thanks for reading this little ditty...

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9 posted 2003-04-14 08:31 AM


smiling...I dunno, I for one am properly satisfied that MY personal salutation is the preferable solution to what may remain permanently secret, due to my precautionary secretiveness related directly to my priveleged status as previously stated.

In other words? YOU ROCK. <--a new clue for the forum.


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10 posted 2003-04-14 08:47 AM


At first, the title had me going in another direction! ---but I wasn't P.S.'d when I found out otherwise.

In your case, I do believe that P.S. stands for Phenomenally Sweet!

P.S.
The poem was Pretty Sensational!

Huggums,
EA


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11 posted 2003-04-14 01:42 PM


Karilea...If you were to ask my husband he would say PS stands for potato salad...but me, I think it means precious sunshine!  
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12 posted 2003-04-14 02:17 PM


HeHe. This was amazing. I loved this piece.

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

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13 posted 2003-05-11 11:39 PM


Sunshine I'm POSTIVELY STUMPED!!!!
This is wonderful....P.S.!!!!
I do enjoy your sunny muse!!!!!
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown



[This message has been edited by Justbleu (05-11-2003 11:42 PM).]

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14 posted 2003-05-11 11:56 PM


ps =  prairie sweetie  

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-11-2003 11:59 PM).]

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15 posted 2003-05-12 03:56 AM


PLAINS SONG !


? maybe

*shrugging shoulders* I dunno.

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16 posted 2003-05-12 09:01 AM


...Passionately Sublime...

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17 posted 2003-05-12 10:46 AM


PIP's Sunshine?



lovely write...

regards,
sudhir

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18 posted 2003-05-13 02:05 AM


aw comeon! waiting...waiting...hint please?
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?
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20 posted 2003-06-01 03:37 AM


Its Particularly Straining... to have you not tell us what it is!


Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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21 posted 2003-06-01 03:44 AM


Hey, are you poetically satisfied?
LOL...or poetically stranded? saved?

poetry simplified?

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22 posted 2003-06-01 03:49 AM


I'm certain we'll all be Pleasantly Surprised at the answer. Soon...right?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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23 posted 2003-06-01 04:50 AM


yaknow, you ain't gettin' out of this one we're not gonna let ya!
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24 posted 2003-06-01 05:31 AM


precociously Sharon?
Now that was a very clever poem I must say.

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25 posted 2003-06-01 08:44 AM


Passionated Sunshine.....love the read..love the PS....


Charisma

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26 posted 2003-06-01 08:53 AM


Sunshine, you are being  Purposely   Secretive about
this little gem.    

Karilea, I think you have us stumped,
for sure!!

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-01-2003 08:55 AM).]

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27 posted 2003-06-01 09:34 AM



Yep, you're all stumped, for sure!  But I'm glad to see you all having fun with this!

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28 posted 2003-06-01 11:58 AM




Politely Surprised?

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29 posted 2003-06-01 06:46 PM


Driving me nuts here Kari.  I obsess over the strangest things.     Give us another clue....PLEASE!!!!!!!
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30 posted 2003-06-01 06:55 PM


poetically stimulating...

yes, I am sure you are this
    
         P.S.

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For Duncan...a clue....

P.S.

could stand for a movie that is not current...

however, it's main stars?

Are still stars....

and who should we thank for naming me such?

only our very own Serene one...

oh yes...

there have been hints throughout the forums....

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32 posted 2003-06-01 06:57 PM


Yes,  PLEEEEASSSEEEE!!!!!       
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33 posted 2003-06-01 07:45 PM


Hmmm.....I'll be back!  
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34 posted 2003-06-01 08:50 PM


Peggy Sue?
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35 posted 2003-06-01 11:58 PM


Dang Dunc...I'll bet you got it!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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36 posted 2003-06-02 12:07 PM


pretty special?
'cuz you are, yanno

practically sacred? LOL

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37 posted 2003-06-02 06:51 AM



Duncan, you get the golden peanut.  Yep...one of our astute members once said "you remind me of...." and you know what?  

There are SOME days....

she couldn't be more right!  Good job Dunc.

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38 posted 2003-06-02 08:21 AM


Not bad for a porch puppy huh?     Morning Sunshine!
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39 posted 2003-06-02 08:32 AM


Postively Sensational?...Yes

believe in what your heart feels...

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40 posted 2003-06-02 08:47 AM


Not bad at all, you dawg you!  LOL...Now I know the secret to getting a lot of replies.  Leave a mystery be for awhile, and everyone tries to figure out WHAT?

LOL...thanks everyone!  This has been fun!

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