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Dreamer@
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since 2003-04-13
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Denmark

0 posted 2003-04-13 05:04 PM


Red and white !
Is like a bright night.
For the hearts in place !
Dont let them race.
Enjoy the time of life !
Do it as sharp as a knife.
Let the feelings blow out !
Just for to show the crowd.
That there is so much love !
That you will forever be above.
Roses are red and white !
Full of love and light to say goodnight.

[This message has been edited by Dreamer@ (04-13-2003 05:28 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-13 05:21 PM




(smiles) This is a beautiful debut, sweet friend, I certainly wish this to come true for you as your heart is deserving of loves comfort, God Bless You, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Startime55
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2 posted 2003-04-13 05:24 PM


"Our time will come and be"
Wonderfully put....I love the way this poem expresses how love can heal the soul...Welcome to Passions...may you bask in the warm and loving embrace you will find here.

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2003-04-13 05:43 PM


A nice first post, But?
You seem to be a pretty confused poet....


I've seen the title of this thing change 3 or 4 times...

Second thoughts? Thirds? Could be best to leave things alone.

~wranx

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

Dreamer@
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Denmark
4 posted 2003-04-13 05:49 PM


Sorry people the first poem i put in here told a story taht is best of being untold.

Smile but i hope you enjoy the others too smile.

Sorry wranx


wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2003-04-13 08:04 PM


There is no apology due...to me.

Perhaps to another? And happy birthday!


vandana
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6 posted 2003-04-13 08:17 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS ENJOYED
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-04-13 09:07 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2003-04-14 12:40 PM


welcome to passions
Dreamer@
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since 2003-04-13
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Denmark
9 posted 2003-04-15 04:11 PM


Thnaks all !

For the warm welcome.

Im sorry i took out the first poem and put in this one i guess the newest one i posted called Against all odds is written inteh words i normally do smile.

And again thanks for the welcome i hope you enjoy my posts as i already enjoyed some of yours.

Dreamer@

Life is for mee to be !

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 2003-04-24 12:08 PM


This is sweet!!!!
Welcome To Passions!!!!
Enjoyed this!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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