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OH Check out this Afternoon!
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OH Check out this Afternoon! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 OH Check out this Afternoon! Isn’t it delightful this day so bright and clear somewhere it may be raining but for a fact, please hear that though it may be gray out there in your heart, please see the Shine! knowing that you’re someone’s love and someone calls you “mine!” O what an afternoon it’s calling for some bright it was so very long and dark just hours before, last night ~ but now the springs are welling flowers peeking from their dwelling rabbits rampant in the sun not the only ones for fun! O glorious day, favoring rays freckles peeking, lovebirds seeking glancing chances for romances and little larks there in the park… from south to north, and east to west spring has sprung forth its very best and so I have to ask, you see… if you'll enjoy afternoon with me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Karilea, this made me smile in joy! How inviting! Yes I just enjoyed the scene thanks to your fine writing! Love, Margherita |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!Who could refuse to spend just such an afternoon with you...shining bright and beautiful...you fill the heart with joy...I love it... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...I'm there with barefeet!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, so far this new open forum seems to positively burst with Springtime and happiness posts! This one made me want to dangle my feet in a cool stream or lake. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah, a beautiful write on a beauitiful day! Much enjoyed the read Karilea. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - ok, I'll be right there to enjoy the afternoon. The sun is shining here also, but a little shower might come in... BC |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
April is finally in the cooperative mode for us. I, too, have the most beautiful day to enjoy in St. Louis as well as beautiful poetry to savor. Who could ask for anything more? -Patricia |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Well of course I will. But I'll enjoy it from the indoors while I write my research paper for Philosophy.  Love your poem. Lots of cute images, and the style you chose to write the poem in really adds to the overall cheerful tone of it. Gave me a real grin to read. Thank you for sharing this with us, Sunshine. Parasite God becomes as |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'll be right over!  I wish. A lovvely write Sunshine  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Great write Karilea...and it's a beautiful day here too.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - a delightful poem to go along with a delightful day. Isn't springtime a joy? I think so too. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
flowers peeking from their dwelling My afternoon found me helping the flowers along... I was filthy with potting soil and loving every minute of it! LOL This leaves just such a smile... *S* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
you brought smiles here... regards, sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*shaking head in awe* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I would love to build a sandcastle with you any day! Lovely sentiments in this "sunny" delight. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea!!! Check it out in Canada today! Canada's southern most city will be in the 80's tomorrow!! WoooHooo! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This poem makes up for me being stuck inside at worl all day! Thanks...for bringing the beauty of the world to me. Eric |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I would gadly love to play in the sun..... Lovely poem.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah. . .now, this is just what I needed for this gray, dreary afternoon here. . . thank you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
What a song this is, in praise of springish things! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm on my way for some fun with the illustrious Sun!  Glorious poem for a glorious day by a glorious writer! Happy Spring hugs, Linda |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
If only, its grey and uglyoutside and it rained all weekend but I'll thank you for the image and hope next weekend treats me better. Long weekend woohoo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Karilea! Thank you for sharing this afternoon with me. |
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