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Rainy Day Tears
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Rainy Day Tears |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Rainy Day Tears Engulfed in a sea of sadness Feelings to be saved for a Rainy Day So the raindrops hide The river like flow Of Tears that are shed |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
very nice  Eliza Simmons |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Boy, do I relate to this one! I can't explain why, but for me, crying in the rain always brings faster relief from heart's pain. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I agree with Midnitesun...for some reason crying in the rain feels more cleansing to my heart and soul. Beautifully done. A wonderful poem that will have many heads nodding with agreement. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nay, i don't cry, i run to the nearest shelter  enjoyed the read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... beautiful ... yes, I see sometimes the rain as the tears shed by heaven and to join seems natural! Aren't both kind of tears a true gift after all? Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You have said a lot in these few words. I enjoyed reading it. Tears are a great release of pain. They also flow when I am overjoyed.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
A lot of feelings hidden by the rain. Good write! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Such a sad but lovely write!!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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