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insect
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0 posted 04-29-2003 09:15 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for insect


Rainbows
    A water droplet show
        A path to our shores
           A road to heavens doors
              Arched across the sky
                  Little children ask us why
                     They see dreams in their eyes
                        Future Rainbows full of sigh's
                          As the rainbow is lost in time
                             Dissipating from their mind
                               The dreams remain
                                  Leaving a reality of pain
                                    Then a tear in the child's eye
                                       Believing in our lie
                                         A world left by us
                                           We answer what's the fuss
                                            They long for the rainbow
                                              We turn and go
                                               Leaving our mess                                            
                                                Afraid to confess
                                                 The child looks up at you
                                                 The rainbow is arched around you
                                                  I love you dad
                                                  You cry and feel sad
                                                  The rainbows are dissipating
                                                  Their dreams are fading
                                                  We must help Mother Earth fight
                                                  Before the rainbows turn black and white
© Copyright 2003 insect - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-29-2003 09:28 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Insect~
Such a PLEASURE to see your BEAUTIFUL work again~

Too bad the book won't be in 'color' ...
but you could shine in my backyard ANYDAY !
Casting #1 !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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insect
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2 posted 04-29-2003 09:41 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Any response from you will always
brighten my day with color…Marge..
Thank you

Martie
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3 posted 04-29-2003 09:43 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Insect...A beautiful presentation, and important message as well.  Voting!
dgvarner
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4 posted 04-29-2003 11:24 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

nicely written

enjoyed your colorful display as well..

hugs, g

"If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen

Larry C
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5 posted 04-30-2003 01:21 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Talk about hard work! It is impressive and so well done. Congratulations...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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6 posted 04-30-2003 04:54 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Insect dear heart this is stunning I'm so glad margie sent me here. casting my vote

love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

Muys
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7 posted 04-30-2003 06:45 AM       View Profile for Muys   Email Muys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Muys

Dear insect "Sorry my eyes are not so good. The light letters I can not read but it looks like a  nice rainbow for me.
Muys
Justbleu
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8 posted 04-30-2003 09:33 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is a very lovely rainbow....Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

1slick_lady
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9 posted 04-30-2003 02:48 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady

so nice to see you and this is a wonderful example of your work...vote...h
1slick_lady
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oops didnt vote duhhhhhhhhh
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11 posted 05-01-2003 09:43 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

Oh! This is not only a well-written poem, it's so aesthetically beautiful! Thanks for sharing it!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

insect
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12 posted 05-11-2003 09:37 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Thanks to all for responding!
I haven’t had a lot of time lately on a computer
to respond back to those who have replied, but I
know that I did respond back to all who have
replied after my last post but some how that
post has disappeared!!

So I thank all of you for your replies.
  
junemac
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13 posted 05-25-2003 02:06 PM       View Profile for junemac   Email junemac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit junemac's Home Page   View IP for junemac

marge sent me a link to this poem today. i am stunned by this inspirational piece and think you are extremely clever.

i love this it is brilliant.

hugs from june x
Kit McCallum
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14 posted 05-25-2003 03:56 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I was sure I'd responded to this already, Insect!  I saw it when you first posted it, and thought you'd done an awesome job in both presentation, and sentiment. I adore this.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit
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