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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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They stood on Fidel Castro as the freedom made its speech. A revolutionary ender and a blessing, their's to keep. This is where i stop, and wonder how things could have gone wrong. How the soviet power attracted, once pure, liberty's own soul. It was innocent as white, now is blacker than hell's sauna. Only stop, and wish to think, how the dove could have gone wrong... "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Claire you're poetic talents notwithstanding, the insight and subtle irony of these lines absolutely captivate me. The power of your first line sets the stage for the not so subtle message to follow. Bravo my friend. |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Thank you Waldo for your sweet words  This poem is dear to me in many ways...  "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I wonder too |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
thank you passing shadows for your comment |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
nice Eliza Simmons |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Thank you Eliza Simmons. Your name is familiar have you posted at sparknotes or in Rose's garden? |
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