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MERCURY
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0 posted 04-28-2003 05:48 AM       View Profile for MERCURY   Email MERCURY   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for MERCURY

The tide is changing and I canít swim,

Seeking help,

I optimistically murder a hymn.

From the depths of the slippery sea,

The rising current is snapping and spitting at me.

Feeling tired and weary ,

But eager to live,

I question the waters motive.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 04-29-2003 04:28 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

deep write...how did it get down so far with no replies...?
Brad Majors
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2 posted 04-29-2003 02:23 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

good
SPIRIT
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3 posted 04-29-2003 03:44 PM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

Interesting little piece. I enjoyed.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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4 posted 08-13-2003 11:55 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

I Just read two of your new post (augest 13 2003) and i thought it was a joke but i tell you i really like this and many other stuff you have wrote.

Tequilia

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