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My love was one

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arthur
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0 posted 04-27-2003 08:39 AM       View Profile for arthur   Email arthur   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for arthur


My Love

My Love was one,
Who made the birds sing !
And in the depths of Winter
Could turn my thoughts to Spring

She was the ending of my day
Shared each mornings light
And in between these lay
A warm and loving night

Sadly I turn away from where she lays
Leaving love ,life,and all delight
Weary and endless are my days
Cold and lonely are the nights

Arthur

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Rick
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1 posted 04-27-2003 09:10 AM       View Profile for Rick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rick's Home Page   View IP for Rick

Arthur, enjoyed the sad read, why would one ever leave this love, life plays us strange roles indeed, but live it we must.

Sincerely
Rick
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


2 posted 04-27-2003 08:54 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Well done Michael!
~Hugs across the pond~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Lynda
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Arthur
A very personal poem that struck a chord. If this be true,please don't choose to leave her where she lay - allow her love to embrace your heart. She will warm you in the night and will be with you through the days, crying and maybe even smiling with you, as your life continues to unfold.
Lynda

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Touching and sad.
GG
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5 posted 06-02-2003 08:52 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

even just reading this makes me feel lonely...
so sad

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

pjtalty
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6 posted 06-04-2003 10:32 AM       View Profile for pjtalty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pjtalty

This lovely poem has an old-world feel and a tone of poignancy in its form and expression. It also has a lyrical quality which makes me want to grab a lute and start strumming a melody to your lyrics. The imagination boggles...there I am, a minstrel, sitting at the foot of the throne of King Henry VIII strumming and humming this song.

Gosh! I'm getting carried away. You are to blame for writing such evocative lines!! :-)

Patrick Talty

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