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I Love You (repost-revision from a couple of Opens)

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Temptress
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0 posted 04-23-2003 08:49 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Temptress

(For my Sunshine)

No matter the distance
our hands are nestled in the middle
perched on a bridge of understanding and tolerance.
Do the secrets of our past really matter
when showered in the light of what glows
every time we dream together?
I know you.
I have witnessed the nature of your heart
through words, breath
and the slight whisper of your eyes
as they watch me when you think I am unaware.
How could I be so captivated
that my wits take their leave with each hello?
My gaze entangles with the dark of your lashes,
and I forget the fear of drowning in another love story.
Through glances I know your faults.
Through kisses I understand your desire.
You held me once
while we talked beneath a shadowing rain.
We have drank glasses of each other
while huddled under a dawn sky,
yeilding to the giddiness that passion brings.
Two nude wills
heart bathed beneath their creation of light.
We will love through chaos,
and be steadfast through all matters of storms.
Two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion
a work of art surpassing price.
Our devotion is concrete.
Love endures,
endurance rewards,
and I will aspire to love you in the future
with as much faith as I do now.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

© Copyright 2003 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 04-23-2003 10:24 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress


*click*
Verve
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2 posted 04-24-2003 01:10 AM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verve



Sigh... such wonderful words...




Cheers!

Justbleu
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3 posted 04-24-2003 01:29 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

A great love poem filled with faith, love, and passion!!!! Wonderful write!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you


4 posted 04-24-2003 12:49 PM       View Profile for Moonlight Romeo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonlight Romeo

I am sure that the Sun indeed shines brighter for reading this poem.

It gets my vote.

Thank you.

Peace is the only battle worth waging.
--- Albert Camus

Larry C
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5 posted 04-24-2003 01:21 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Jenn,
I always like your work. It reveals so much emotion and honesty. Here's my vote.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

bsquirrel
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Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 04-24-2003 09:46 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Truly lovely.  Butit should be "have drunk"

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (04-24-2003 09:46 PM).]

Songbird
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8 posted 04-24-2003 10:57 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

I love it and I am casting my vote!
SPIRIT
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9 posted 04-25-2003 07:15 PM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

I like it. I'm with Joyce, but that one small issue will not stop me voting.
waldopepper
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10 posted 04-25-2003 11:23 PM       View Profile for waldopepper   Email waldopepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for waldopepper

Beautiful, stunning, provocative.  This really reaches out and grabs hold.  The imagery is superb.  Wonderful words Jennifer.
SimplyGold
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Thank you, wonderful!
SG
P.S. A wonderful poem to put me to rest from a long day!
 
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