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THE UNINVITED

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teledon
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THE UNINVITED

In the quiet of my nights,
worries, ideas, fantasies, fears,
tumbling, one atop the other,
intrude upon the half-world
'twixt my reality and dreams.
Like peevish holiday shoppers,
they jostle and press forward,
each seeking attention.
Neither asleep nor awake,
with sensibilities stunted,
I succumb to the thoughts
that cascade through my mind.
I can but yearn for the closure
of night,
the blessed relief of the day's
first light.



"keep it simple"

[This message has been edited by teledon (04-21-2003 04:34 PM).]

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no box to vote...you forgot to check the box to submit this for the book
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there it is...!
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Hi and welcome to Passions. I liked this very much, good writing and expression.

My husband often has nights like this!

Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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I like
SPIRIT
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I can relate to this - well done.
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