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Mystic Mystron
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0 posted 2003-04-20 01:05 PM



The light dances above.
The red brushes up to the green.
As the green turns to see the red,
It is asked by the blue for the next dance.
They begin to dance, a dance that flows,
Flowing like water down a quiet river.
It is a beautiful dance.

The red looks on only to be interrupted.
Red turns to see yellow bowing gracefully,
“Could I have this dance?”
Red and yellow join blue and red on the dance floor.
As they dance a graceful dance other colours join them.

All the colours join each other,
Joining in beauty and light.
They entwine to a wonderful sound,
Nature’s song of love and light.
But don’t look away for then they are gone,
Dancing off into the dawn.




You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words.
You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first.

[This message has been edited by Mystic Mystron (04-20-2003 01:26 PM).]

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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2003-04-20 05:45 PM



Lovely poem, it's getting my vote

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-04-21 04:28 AM


don't look away...
El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
3 posted 2003-04-21 12:31 PM


The colors are dancing, and I plan on joining them. For what else dances as gracefully as colors at dawn?

You've got my vote

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
4 posted 2003-04-21 01:05 PM


what a nice picture they painted with the colors
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2003-04-21 01:52 PM


This is very nice!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-04-22 01:14 PM


A very colorful write of nature's song and dance!

Love & Light,
EA


SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
7 posted 2003-04-22 05:09 PM


Probably a little late to get into the book, but very vote worthy indeed and I happily voted.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2003-04-22 06:51 PM



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garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-04-22 11:27 PM


Count my vote in too.
Ethel

Joyce Johnson
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10 posted 2003-04-23 02:13 PM


Hope this one makes it.  Joyce
Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
11 posted 2003-04-26 01:38 AM


Yeah, I know, I'm biased cause I'm your wife.... but then again you know what a critic I can be.... and I really loved this one... I just thought you should know that I am officially voting for it...

Love ya Sweetie,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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