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Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore

0 posted 2003-04-17 05:59 AM





Have you come to see,
and lay your roses red,
on the grave of Love,
and kneel upon the greying bed.

Will you shed silent tears,
or gently pray,
or speak words of forgiveness,
the ones I never thought you'll say.

Gravel upon your feet,
Muddied are your hands,
Atonement there can never be,
For the pain is all but buried.

"Everything will be okay in the end. If it's not okay, then it's not the end."


Cheers!



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life
Junior Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 36
India
1 posted 2003-04-17 07:58 AM



lovely n sad...left me thinkin for a while


i dun think u need to get any better
u r PERFECT!!!

luvs
life


life
Junior Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 36
India
2 posted 2003-04-17 08:02 AM



feels like an aching hole that refuses to be filled with love.....lovely....

keep writing
hope to hear more from ur side

luvs
life

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