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arthur
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0 posted 04-14-2003 07:17 AM       View Profile for arthur   Email arthur   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for arthur


Shore

Go to the shore where the sea laps bright
Wait by our rock for the end of night
Look East now, see,the first coils of light!

Whilst the things of day are still to be
Yet dark night has quitely slipped away
Be still now my love,and remember me

arthur
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 04-14-2003 09:01 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Hauntingly sad, yet lovely Michael.
Enjoyed.
~Hugs across the pond~
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2 posted 04-14-2003 07:06 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Sweet and pensive.  Joyce
Titia Geertman
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That's the sweetest verse I've seen in days.

Getting my vote definitely.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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4 posted 04-14-2003 10:05 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Really enjoyed this and thought of a painting done by John Waterhouse actually that sure would look nice with this.  Enjoyed!

    

Neeraja
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What a sweet little poem!!!

Neeraja
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6 posted 04-15-2003 02:42 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

you know, I do, and probably always will
wranx
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Fine one arthur
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8 posted 04-16-2003 12:49 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Arthur, I really like this and
it has my vote.
Hugs,
Ethel

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


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I really enjoyed this one!

Warm hugs,
EA
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I would love this one to be in the book....but if not, then at least I have it here
Lynda
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This makes me feel cold Arthur.....
is this what you meant?
Bring the warmth of the dawn
to us all.
please feel it.
Lynda
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Beneath the northern stars


12 posted 03-29-2006 01:22 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

This is beautiful....something about the theme reminded me of the poem Sweet Afton.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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