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teledon
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 51
Florida USA

0 posted 2003-04-13 10:25 PM

Some of us
are praying, reaching.
Asking much,
we beg, beseeching.

Is God there
or is he hidden?
Does he come
so brashly bidden?

What if God
is not God at all?
What if man's concept
is too small?

Is there not
some fathomless force,
yet undreamt,
reigning o'er life's course?

In this world
of futile dancers,
who presumes
to know the answers?

[This message has been edited by teledon (04-14-2003 04:38 PM).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-04-13 10:56 PM

Good questions we must all find our own answers to. Joyce

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-04-14 02:41 AM

neat! i enjoyed this! I'm checking it!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2003-04-20 06:11 PM

I've got no answers, but I got a vote, does that count too?

good poem.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-04-21 04:18 AM

yes!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-04-21 01:33 PM

very interesting write!!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-04-21 01:42 PM

Indeed...who presumes?
Intriguing write...thank you!

Mystic Mystron
Member

since 2002-02-15

Posts 69
North York .Ontario

7 posted 2003-04-21 06:40 PM

I really enjoied this poem htank you for writing and sharing it with us.

You got my vote

You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words.
You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first.

teledon
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 51
Florida USA

8 posted 2003-04-21 08:20 PM

Thanks to all for your kind words ..
they make this newcomer feel welcome .. (tele)Don
FL, USA

"keep it simple"

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

9 posted 2003-04-21 11:00 PM

Ahhh, found you, I remember this one for sure, still like it very much.

Keep them coming and I probably forgot to say WELCOME to the blue pages of poetry.

Shame I can't vote twice

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-04-22 09:23 AM

Well you certainly are off to a good start with this thought-provoking piece of writing!
Welcome to Passions!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-22-2003 09:24 AM).]

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