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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Building Glory A glance upon the descending fire, upon the purple whispering cotton A gaze upon the maturing cover of blinking visions from afar A dream of your illumination through the opened vast expanse Through the rolling away of restless color down from far between the stars A visionary warmth of flight with siblings of grace and favor An anticipation of a return to light with blessed sons and daughters A search across the eastern line and through the heavens so densely spread Through the galaxies of twists and turns in search of our good father Timothy Work He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 [This message has been edited by Poet4Christ (04-10-2003 11:39 PM).] |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Tim, this is beautiful... eye candy for your mind... and it touched my heart.... it is a poem of hope and anticipation. Wonderful work!!!! I has my vote.... Blessings!!! Sherry I read it again... I have to say more..... Your second stanza is of particular beauty. "A visionary warmth of flight with siblings of grace and favor An anticipation of a return to light with blessed sons and daughters" Someday skies of brilliant blue, Will cut the gloomy clouds with glory As the angels and we in one accord Sing of Salvation's Story. Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (04-11-2003 12:48 AM).] |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
A most steadfast and assuring prayer my friend. So be it...and Amen. Wonderful! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Voted for this little gem. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very happily voted for this. |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Thank you all. I know this poem is a little short and originally I wanted it to be longer, but I think a certain somebody so much greater than me wanted it this way. Thank you Sherry for your comments, I really enjoyed writing this one, because the anticipation is real. Waldopepper, Joyce, and Spirit thank you so much for your votes. I have a long way to go for this one to ever be accepted. This one was really just for me anyway. Thanx - Tim PS - i feel funny voting for my own poetry, so I never have. Just wondering what everybody thinks about that. He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Great write! Wish you luck with this one, Tim!  Warm hugs, EA |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hi Tim, very good depiction. Good luck!! mysticpoe |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
I liked it. Voted for it. ex animo, Aaron IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That will be a wonderful day, indeed, Tim! Beautifully expressed! Yes, vote for your own poem, don't feel funny, it's allowed! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tim, I like this poem and enjoyed reading it. You have my vote.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very inspirational piece! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Timothy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I felt myself ascending through a whole different shade of violet reading this to the golden heavens! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Timothy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Thank you all. There really is no way to express through words the anticipation that lives in my heart for that day. God bless you and again.. thank you. He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Wish I could vote again. Joyce |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Well written and from the heart, often I find it is hard to express the joyful or pleasant experiences as I am usually stuck on the negative ones. It is good that you have taken time to express the positive and that you are dwelling on Godly things as God commanded us to do. Steven |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
BUMP! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wonderful |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Poet4Christ,I loved it  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Thank you all so much...God bless you.. Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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