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A friend who is unworthy

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EllinneT
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0 posted 04-10-2003 03:21 PM       View Profile for EllinneT   Email EllinneT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EllinneT

A friend who is Unworthy


At one time, you were
my best friend.I thought
we would be until the end.
I start to sigh when I see
you with that one guy, I
know it's hard as you walk
by to even say hi it hurts
to know that your with that
same one that tore me so.
A friend who is unworthy,
would fit your description,
for the things you have,
put me through. I know
someday you will come back
cause i know he will hurt you,
     just like that.


EllinneT


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leighsa
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1 posted 04-10-2003 03:24 PM       View Profile for leighsa   Email leighsa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for leighsa

Very nice ellinnet......
I told you now people can vote......
i love this and is very true....
I hope you have a better friendship with me,or someone else
I know the person ur with now wont hurt you....
ashgiel got my vote!!!!!!

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(big hugggsssssss) Faithfulness makes an ideal friend and commitment and obviously this person isn't being a great friend and I hope all works out for you and you can move on with comfort! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellinne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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carol
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3 posted 04-12-2003 03:40 PM       View Profile for carol   Email carol   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit carol's Home Page   View IP for carol

Very good but you are better off with out a friend like this

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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4 posted 04-12-2003 09:47 PM       View Profile for Musicmaker1969   Email Musicmaker1969   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Musicmaker1969's Home Page   View IP for Musicmaker1969

You sound so sad, like you have been betrayed.  I pray for God to heal your hurt and fill your loneliness.

Jesus lives in my heart!
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

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5 posted 04-12-2003 10:05 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

This is very sad to me. If someone like this is your friend, you sure don't need any enemies. True friends don't betray each other this way. I hope that you meet other true friends.
Hugs  
Ethel
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6 posted 06-22-2003 12:42 PM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

this poem reallyreally hurts, good write... I hope all is well and can be worked out.

                   Love,
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7 posted 06-22-2003 05:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

quote:
This is very sad to me. If someone like this is your friend, you sure don't need any enemies. True friends don't betray each other


Yeah, what Ethel said ... my thoughts EXACTLY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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