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EllinneT
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since 2003-04-04
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0 posted 2003-04-10 03:21 PM


A friend who is Unworthy


At one time, you were
my best friend.I thought
we would be until the end.
I start to sigh when I see
you with that one guy, I
know it's hard as you walk
by to even say hi it hurts
to know that your with that
same one that tore me so.
A friend who is unworthy,
would fit your description,
for the things you have,
put me through. I know
someday you will come back
cause i know he will hurt you,
     just like that.


EllinneT



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leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America
1 posted 2003-04-10 03:24 PM


Very nice ellinnet......
I told you now people can vote......
i love this and is very true....
I hope you have a better friendship with me,or someone else
I know the person ur with now wont hurt you....
ashgiel got my vote!!!!!!


Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-10 07:17 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Faithfulness makes an ideal friend and commitment and obviously this person isn't being a great friend and I hope all works out for you and you can move on with comfort! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellinne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
3 posted 2003-04-12 03:40 PM


Very good but you are better off with out a friend like this

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Musicmaker1969
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Peterborough, Ontario Canada
4 posted 2003-04-12 09:47 PM


You sound so sad, like you have been betrayed.  I pray for God to heal your hurt and fill your loneliness.

Jesus lives in my heart!
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-04-12 10:05 PM


This is very sad to me. If someone like this is your friend, you sure don't need any enemies. True friends don't betray each other this way. I hope that you meet other true friends.
Hugs  
Ethel

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
6 posted 2003-06-22 12:42 PM


this poem reallyreally hurts, good write... I hope all is well and can be worked out.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
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Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2003-06-22 05:51 PM


quote:
This is very sad to me. If someone like this is your friend, you sure don't need any enemies. True friends don't betray each other


Yeah, what Ethel said ... my thoughts EXACTLY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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