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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
an oboe's touch awakened me this morning, early in the day. fluttering the underside of my chin, swimming to my ears, not tickly, but soft as the sound... ...and the quaking of flower petals reaching for the new sun. the player loves me. loves me like no other. and my heart grows with her breath, in and out of me - reaching me to Heaven in the basket of a note - thus she takes me, cradeling me, i am washed. caressed. like a rose that feels the warm pink cheek of love, I am free. to be. and I love her, this player. this one breathing to me. this stranger to dusk; that see's the moon so fleetingly, so rarely. and misses it not. her sacrafice is nobel and free; she plays for me. her breath is for me, her love, her touch -- all for me. I become the result of her song, I become love. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, morning becomes, indeed... lovely lovely! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
machiner, this is really pretty. Kind of like a love song.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
That oboe was really my alarm clock...HA! it was driving me batty. Thanks for reading. machiner |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may her kiss always bring a smile to your face each morning and shed light on your heart with a gentle wake-up call! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
machiner, I enjoyed this read, the player, the cradeling and turning into love, had the mind playing games for moments which made the read very interesting, still not sure I have the full concept but enjoyed, great to see you posting your work, look forward to seeing much more of you. Sincerely Rick |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
like a rose that feels the warm pink cheek of love i liked this line very good write |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Nice! I enjoyed and voted. |
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