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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 I move gently with the tide As it is guided by the moon Many lovers walk beside me Under love's spell they swoon My color sometimes varies From deep green to sapphire blue I'll cool you down in Summer As my waves envelop you Many vessels travel upon me Searching for a guiding light Whales call to one another Throughout the dead of night Dolphins swim inside me And the seabirds come to dine I am home to many creatures In the sunlight how I shine And when the day has ended After the sun has set on me I'll rest beneath the moonlight And stay as calm as I can be * * * * "I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you." - Shawn Mullins |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The voice of the ocean. How lovely. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Exquisite - words and picture. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Poetically, and pictorally, perfect! Smiles across the miles, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-10-2003 09:33 AM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, I'll keep writing about my gardens if you'll continue to share your ocean with me! This is just beautiful and the picture is one I have not seen before. How I would love to snuggle under the blue of the sea. Hugs for peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
This is just so great. Love reading all these great writes. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I love the ocean, and now this poem.  “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, I love the ocean so much and dream ever so much of living right beisde her as I am a close friend of Her infinite grace and comfort! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is gorgeous, Sue! I hear the ocean calling me, again, still. Very beautiful! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I love the art work and absolutely adore the poem! you've got my vote. Sunkissed. |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Suetang- I so love the ocean and your poem just made me want to be there. I suppose I am a sucker for poems involving nature. Now I can't wait to go to the beach. Thank you and I would love to see this one in the book. You have my vote - Thanx - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 [This message has been edited by Poet4Christ (04-10-2003 11:53 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, Sue. I hope it gets in the book.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
I love the ocean and these words of yours make it all the more captivating and intriguing and appealing. What wonders may lie within its vast expanse. Beautiful. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful... I feel as though I have sand between my toes after this read... I love it! *S* |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: This brings the ocean to me and makes me miss it all the more! I haven't been to the Coast for almost two years and I'm really lonesome for it. Maybe next year! Lovely poem and picture. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, living on the beach as I do, I often her the ocean talking to me and now I know who's voice it really is. Very nicely done and the cadence of this piece is as soothing as the tide in the early a.m. You most certainly have my vote. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really enjoy poetry about the ocean....it has a calming effect over me!!!! This was very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I love it. So gentle. Eliza Simmons |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
such a beautiful write about one of natures most powerful and awesome forces on this Earth...you got my vote! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I like this one. Your surreal picture is also very beautiful. You've done well with a tight form of verse in this poem. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
the roar of the sea the ebbing of tides two ships passing in the nite all makes for a wonderfull write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Wonderful imagery!!! Simply beautiful! Definitely vote-worthy!!! Cheers!! |
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