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Justbleu
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Fallen Leaves
Dead to the ground
A stitch of time
Taken from mine
As I look beyond
Sweet tears touch
Dawn light lay across
As nature awakes
Near snow topped peaks
I say my prayer
For you I keep



"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown




[This message has been edited by Justbleu (04-10-2003 09:29 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 04-09-2003 01:54 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Lovely words to be included in our book.  Joyce
Charisma
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2 posted 04-09-2003 01:58 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Very nice penned.

Charisma
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3 posted 04-09-2003 02:17 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

You know this almost rang like "Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep" and it was such a lovely prayer as well.  I really look forward to your poetry and this is another reason why.

Don't be too hard on yourself, even Einstein
had trouble tying his shoelaces.

Lighthousebob
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There are some who will always remain. (Amen) I woke up this morning with thoughts of dawn and the promise of a new day as well, so you certainly caught me in the perfect mood to especially vote for this  poem. Good job.

-Bob
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Bridgette~
So gentle ... so lovely ... so you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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A crystal tear
always catches my attention...

this is lovely, Bridgett!
Aimster
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7 posted 04-09-2003 06:43 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

such a lovely beautiful poem! this
was truly full of such wonderful
imagery! take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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Larry C
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Nicely done...here's my vote.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Bill Charles
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10 posted 04-10-2003 12:45 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Justbleu - snow covered mountains high, right here they are in front of my eyes, beautiful the are, as this poem... My vote...

Bc
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11 posted 04-10-2003 12:28 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

Other than the font color, which made it very difficult to read, I loved your words.

Hugs for peace, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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Happily I cast my vote for this.
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(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I wish this smile to always fill your heart and may the leaves shine emerald green with the dawns sunlight gleaming with it! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful hart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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A beautifully tender write Bridgette ~ Bonnie
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Very soft and soothing, Bridgette. Lovely! I had a bit of trouble reading the green font though. Perhaps it is my screen...or maybe my eyes!
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Bridgette...this is so beautiful!
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Passionate friends Thank You sooo much for your thoughtful comments!!!! They mean a lot to me!!!  This place is soo much fun!!!
LOVE AND HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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Lovely job Bridgette.  I really like how you played with the hint of another familiar rhyming phrase in this piece.  The images are beautifully expressed.  Again at the end it subtly reminds of the "lay me down to sleep" rhyme.  Quite witty of you my friend.  And by the way, I certainly do appreciate the "bumps".  You are too kind.  Anyway, you've got my vote with this creatively crafted write.
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19 posted 04-11-2003 02:49 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

This is beautiful, Bridgette.
Here's my vote for the book...*click*
Hugs,
Ethel
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A beauty....for the book
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Hi Justbleu, enyoyed the poem.

mysticpoe
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Much easier to read now, Bridgette! Thanks!
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This is a very lovely write.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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24 posted 04-12-2003 09:32 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

I enjoyed this very much!!

Hugs for Peace, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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