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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia 
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Introduction: I had never given much thought to the idea of predestination until I met and married my beautiful wife, Xiao Yan. I knew you, my dearest, in long gone days, Your face did my dreams adorn. I knew of your grace, your warmhearted ways; I knew you before you were born. Before you were born, my treasured one, I knew you would one day appear Like bright, golden rays of morning sun, Or the music of bells ringing clear. I knew of the beauty of body and mind, I knew of your wondrous eyes; I knew of the nature so gentle and kind, I knew of your spirit so wise. I knew you, my darling, through loneliness While I waited for you in my life; I yearned for the feel of a whispered caress As you vowed to be lover and wife. When you finally came I knew it was you (I had known you for ages before) So I took up your hand (as you wanted me to) And I saw 'twas my ring that you wore. Yes, I knew you, my loved one, from long gone days When you came on that predestined morn; I could now feel the grace of your warmhearted ways Known in dreamings before you were born. [This message has been edited by pjtalty (04-08-2003 10:55 PM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh lovely! Now I am curious - did you meet on your travels there (referring ot your submission in prose?) if I may ask? Funny, how we know we have been waiting all our life for that special person when they finally show up. Don't be too hard on yourself - even Einstein had trouble tying his shoelaces. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I am so glad you found her, the one you knew before. Lovely, lovely poem. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Patrick, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words too, I belive written in the stars by God's cursive rests every lovers promise! (big huggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patrick, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How wonderful for you and your wife to have found each other again. It was destined to be.  Lovely poem... Light & Eternal Love, Earth Angel |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lucky wife! Lucky you!!  Vote worthy indeed. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
such a beautiful write! i also believe in fate and destiny. you def got my vote for this  take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
lovely gentle write Eliza Simmons |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
 Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I'm happy for you. What a wonderful surprise. One day their she was for you. Sweet poem!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
this is just a fab write of feelings |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is gorgeous! I'd love for it to be in the book! Very beautifully expressed! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
nice and romantic arthur |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Ain't love grand? It would make any wife/friend feel very special. Lynda |
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