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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Be still my love, invest in me sight your rhymes and all you feel write a song of symphonies crash your symbols close together darling dance with me. Draw me in your silhouette hold me up beneath the stars run your hands across my heart serenade my morning blue gentle as the wind chimes. Blending shadows in water color we'll paint a sunrise of our own above the sky in shaded hues beyond the forest through the trees lying down in evergreens. Come dream with me tucked undercovers quiet the sound of pounding thunder still my fear and endless wonder spill the moon across the sea. ~and let the music play~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cool. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh yes this is nice. Joyce |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely!! Let the music play - let the voting begin!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - the first thing I thought of when I saw this post was 'Blues', she really needs to write a romantic one. And I opened this, and behold my wish came true. This has got to be one of your best, and I hope it gets into the book. Blues, this is excellent... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! This is perfectly beautiful!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Larry~ Thanks for the cool, dude. (I'm getting so brave)  Joyce~ Thank you, sincerely. Sharon~ I have you to thank. and I do!BC~ Well yes, the blues get old! I wasn't about to submit a poor poor pitiful me kinda poem. Thank you for your nice reply Bill~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this poem reflects your screen-name so beautifully, sweet friend, God Bless You, and may this serenade always be the one breathing in your soul, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks Nancy~ I'm not sure if I was supposed to make it clear that this was a repost, and revised??? My original title was, 'The Real Bluesserenade' I just gotta be me!!! Hugs sweet one~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-06-2003 12:44 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There you go again, reading me right. My title corresponding with my handle might be tacky....but we only live once!! Thanks Noah~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...VERY appealing... Love & Light, Linda |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A mellifluent song...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes, let the music play M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Linda, Nan and Maureen... I appreciate your thoughts and for taking the time to read me. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori, beautiful writing as always from your pen. You leave me in such awe of your amazing work and talent. you def got my vote and friendship! take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely write. I voted for sure on this one. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Lori  I didn't know this was here....but I do now!! And, this music's gotta play in the book.  Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . is that music I hear? Of course it is - I am reading you . . . What an amazing piece Bluesy - saw yourself there for a bit - I did . . . xxoo |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
still my fear and endless wonder spill the moon across the sea. and let the music play Wowwwww, Blues this is really sweeeeeeeet! I very much enjoyed this read... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, I so enjoyed this. I like the second and third stanzas, especially. I was going to mention the music, but that has been done several times. Again, enjoyed this greatly. Quite talented, you are....(you've way too much Grace to ever be tacky...it is a perfect title for the content of poem) Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Taco Jonez Junior Member
since 2003-04-04
Posts 22St. Petersburg, FL |
wow that was a great piece...I especially loved the stanza of making a watercolor I think it was stanza 3... but i loved the form of the piece and i love how serenade was used perfectly i thought in each stanza.... awesome... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful.. Susan |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
This is very beautiful. I have a great passion for poetry dealing with nature and the love it holds in all of our hearts. This peice is so inviting and it could be an incredible song. God bless you. You have my vote. Thank you - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
This is very beautiful. I have a great passion for poetry dealing with nature and the love it holds in all of our hearts. This peice is so inviting and it could be an incredible song. God bless you. You have my vote. Thank you - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Good to see your work here, ya got my vote! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am so appreciative of each and every kind word. You encourage me in ways you can't begin to know. Thank you all, sincerely~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Loved this the first time I read it.too |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
wranx |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Holy Crap!  |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Bump. I had to return to read this one again. Loved it. sorry about the double post earlier. He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Larry~ need I say more? Except, who would have ever thunk it? I thank you for the nudges, you know I do! Hi~ Thank you for the bump up good Poet4Christ.. I'm thrilled that you actually enjoyed this that much! I also wanted to say how much I like your signature~ I don't know that I walk wisely, but I try to step lightly. Thank you again~ very much! |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
A most stirring and passionate performance here my friend. Whether through music or on canvas, you have a multi-media delight of thoughts and sounds and images. Very nice. |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Congratulations!!! good stuff. He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a beautiful poem.... Congratulations!!! The book is going to be full of some of the best poetry!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Bluesy - just came to pat you on the back Congrats missy . . . *smiles* you deserve it! xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Blending music, color, and words together into one beautiful piece of poetry...this is exquisite, dear bluesygal. Absolutely a book submission! |
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