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Lonely Shadow
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0 posted 2003-04-05 01:19 AM


if one wish could be granted tonight
may it be to find the words
to capture every moment
indeed the very essence
of the boundless love within my heart
many a countless night I have spent
shedding tears of pure joy
tears never shed once until she came into my life
I lie here, savoring each and every moment
feeling  my heart burst with the love
for whom I searched for so long
the woman who will forever hold my heart
still wishing, hoping, praying that I may find the words
to truly speak of this overwhelming feeling inside
so that she may know how she makes me feel
and how the once lonely shadow found the light
that only she could bring to him
hopefully, I'll find the words soon enough


Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

[This message has been edited by Lonely Shadow (04-05-2003 01:20 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-05 04:38 AM


Just show her this poem.  That should do it. Joyce
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2 posted 2003-04-05 06:26 PM




(smiles) I think all of these wonderful and honest words you've written would work just perfectly! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, show this toher and let her know how much you love her, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-04-09 08:50 AM


Believe me! You most definitely have found the words!

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

SPIRIT
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4 posted 2003-04-09 09:30 AM


The words! the words!!

You have the words.

[This message has been edited by SPIRIT (04-09-2003 09:31 AM).]

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5 posted 2003-04-09 03:37 PM


LonelyShadow~
A tender write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Aimster
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6 posted 2003-04-09 07:02 PM


such a lovely peek at your heart. i
am sure she knows! hope to see this
in the book! take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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