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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-04-04 12:19 PM

“DANCING WITH YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Holding you close this summer night,
the fragrance of you hypnotizes me,
your warmth radiates as my hand
senses tenderness of your neck
touched with silk flowing
to shoulders bare…

Lips of mine whisper of tenderness,
wanting the delights of you, as
hips sway together in moonbeams
caressing your face in the
darkness, sexy your eyes
when they sparkle with
the devils moon…

Shadows embrace in unison as
melodies of desire sing
on a gentle breeze with
enchanting rapture
capturing my
being which melts, when
dancing with you…
~~~~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

1 posted 2003-04-04 12:50 PM

May I have this dance, sir?

Enchanting, as always and it gets my vote.

Hugs for peace ... Mrti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2003-04-04 03:06 PM

Can I have the next dance?

Charisma

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-04-04 03:16 PM

You do these love songs so well. Joyce

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-04-04 04:46 PM

Bill - your gypsy soul is peeking through . . .

hips sway together in moonbeams
caressing your face in the
darkness, sexy your eyes
when they sparkle with
the devils moon…

This is just silk . . . I love it! xxoo

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

5 posted 2003-04-04 06:47 PM

"capturing my
being which melts, when
dancing with you…"

Oooohhhhhh my Bill ~ Running to make the hubby repeat these lines ~ over and over and over and.... Simply beautiful! ~ Bonnie

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-04 08:25 PM

I do hope your dance card isn't full..
How about a tango or a cha cha?

~Hugs & a vote~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

7 posted 2003-04-04 11:01 PM

An absolutely lovely dance, Bill.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27

Posts 203
California Beaches

8 posted 2003-04-04 11:03 PM

I love this.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-04-04 11:56 PM

(smiles) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love dancing and want to learn how to dance all the Latin dances, they have so much poetry in them! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is whimsically delightful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

10 posted 2003-04-05 12:07 PM

Super duper good!

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2003-04-05 12:13 PM

Bill,
Hmmmm, I think I know that song...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

waldopepper
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 157
Tennessee, USA

12 posted 2003-04-05 02:10 AM

'Tis the dance indeed my friend. A wonderful, romantic, and high-charged foray into the delightful world of aesthetic love. Really good stuff.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

13 posted 2003-04-05 07:57 AM

Waltz?.. Old Time Rock 'n' Roll? You're on...

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

14 posted 2003-04-05 10:27 AM

"Shadows embrace in unison as
melodies of desire sing
on a gentle breeze with
enchanting rapture
capturing my
being which melts, when
dancing with you…"

beautiful lovely writing Bill! As always
your work is stunning...I love the imagery
and mood you create in your poetry!
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

15 posted 2003-04-05 12:21 PM

BC - I picture it now swaying in the breeze. Must be on a cruise dancing in the moonlight. memories - oh those memories.

[This message has been edited by Ariana (04-05-2003 12:22 PM).]

Sunshine

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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2003-04-05 01:34 PM

Not only do I like the way this sounds,
I'm enjoying the way it's presented...
well done, Sir Bill...well done

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

17 posted 2003-04-06 11:12 AM

There is such beauty in this poetic dance of yours. I enjoyed the essence of it all.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

18 posted 2003-04-06 09:42 PM

Well done, Bill!

Justbleu
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Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

19 posted 2003-04-07 09:58 AM

Me Likes!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

20 posted 2003-04-08 08:33 AM

I thought I had voted for this lovely piece, but I was mistaken....mistake corrected

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

21 posted 2003-04-08 08:18 PM

There can never be too much romance in a book of poetry can there?

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

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California Desert

22 posted 2003-04-09 10:10 AM

Bump

Irie
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since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

23 posted 2003-04-09 12:43 PM

Tap Tap May I cut in to this dreamy romance?

You have my vote, fine poet Sir!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

24 posted 2003-04-10 09:56 PM

Bump....

Denise

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25 posted 2003-04-10 09:57 PM

Beautiful dance, Bill!

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

26 posted 2003-04-15 01:08 PM

BC
After reading this again, I have decided on dancing on the beach in the Bahamas, soft breeze, soft sand in the moonlight. Hmmmmm.

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

27 posted 2003-04-20 11:33 AM

BUMP

QjQ
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Posts 3756
U.S.A.

28 posted 2003-04-21 02:30 PM

danceing to the rhythm brings back many memorys

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

29 posted 2003-04-29 04:33 AM

ah, dance with me...charming!

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

30 posted 2003-04-29 01:11 PM

Had to read it once again, and yep still want a dance with you

Charisma

SimplyGold
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Posts 1453

31 posted 2003-05-11 11:55 PM

Bill,
Nice read
SG

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