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Charisma
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0 posted 2003-04-03 02:11 PM


Within the
soothe of
your warmth
my heart
developed
showering
tenderness
'twill be a part
of your heart

When I
reached out
I found
kindness
framed by
your
loving soul

Your patience
wrapped me
in sighs
of love
and I
yes I could
breathe again
to find
myself
in you



© Copyright 2003 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2003-04-03 02:13 PM


Beautiful thoughts of love
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-03 02:15 PM


Simply l-o-v-e-r-l-y...

Love & Light,
Linda

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3 posted 2003-04-03 02:37 PM


Oh, so lovely Charisma ~ Such a whisper of tenderness.  Bonnie
Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2003-04-03 03:17 PM


So short, so sweet, so lovely.  There's room to tuck this into the book.  Love, Joyce
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5 posted 2003-04-03 06:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Charisma, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may he always sing in your heart as you will truly always be the song deep in his soul! (kiss on cheek) This is such a special and lovely write, sweet friend, yay, you have my golden vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-04-03 06:42 PM


Very very lovely!  

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2003-04-03 07:11 PM


voting and sighing  

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


Larry C
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8 posted 2003-04-03 11:05 PM


I like this and hope it's in the book.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2003-04-04 12:10 PM


Charisma - beautiful write, as you do... My vote is in...

BC

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10 posted 2003-04-04 03:56 AM



Must have overlooked this one.
Gladly I caught it in time, it's lovely and getting my vote.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

pjtalty
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11 posted 2003-04-04 05:20 AM


A gentle, elegant flow of images enhanced by the virtue of brevity has resulted in a readable, satisfying poem. Brava! Worthy of inclusion in the book.

Patrick Talty

[This message has been edited by pjtalty (04-04-2003 05:22 AM).]

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12 posted 2003-04-05 08:08 PM


That's all that's needed, a heart to share yours with.

(sure makes it easier to breathe anyway)  

Enjoyed your tender words Charisma~


Charisma
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13 posted 2003-04-07 09:15 AM


Thank you all for stopping by, to read and to reply on my poem. Your kind comments are very much appreciated.
((hugs))) you all  

Charisma

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14 posted 2003-04-07 11:04 AM


Lovely poem SweetPoetFriend Charisma...

Hugs2uAlways
*~coco~*

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15 posted 2003-04-07 11:51 AM


very lovely write, as well as interesting
and unique style! refreshing, you got my
vote, hope to see this in the book!

take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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16 posted 2003-04-07 01:09 PM


A beautiful write....Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


garysgirl
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17 posted 2003-04-12 10:13 PM


Charisma, this is a beautiful
love poem, and I love it. Vote  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

arthur
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18 posted 2003-04-13 11:31 AM


or me?
arthur

Mark Bohannan
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19 posted 2003-04-13 11:42 AM


Love?  Ummmmmmmm .......... yeahhhhh ... you know how I like that topic and your words whisper the comfort and peace that is found in love very beautifully.  Happy to vote on this one sweetie.  
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