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cpalmer
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0 posted 2003-04-03 10:50 AM


Love's Entwine


Gentle breeze of summertime
Sheds the heat of love's entwine
The summer luna casts it's spell
Of love's past once to tell
A love that never dies

The warmth of passion through the day
Promises to never stray
Far from where the seed was set
On the night that love first met
A love that never dies

Cpalmer


God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-03 11:01 AM


Very sweet poem.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-04-03 11:13 AM


Tender and very touching write...  

Love & Light,
EA

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3 posted 2003-04-03 11:25 AM


Every single line ~ perfection!  Bonnie
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4 posted 2003-04-03 02:26 PM


Beautiful penned!!

Charisma

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5 posted 2003-04-03 03:02 PM


Cindi~
Just lovely and so good to see you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2003-04-03 06:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, all your romantic words make me smile, and may your heart always beat happily with the song of true love! (big hugggssssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-04-03 06:43 PM


Very gentle and loving..much enjoyed.  
Martie
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8 posted 2003-04-03 07:21 PM


A beautiful love poem!
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9 posted 2003-04-03 07:39 PM


Hi Cindi voting here, beautiful poem, beautifully written
Love and warm stuff
as always
Marsha

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
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10 posted 2003-04-03 07:57 PM


Sounds like a special and forever love~

Just beautiful~

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11 posted 2003-04-03 08:07 PM


*sigh*...Love is grand...eh!

enjoyed..

hugs, g

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12 posted 2003-04-03 09:12 PM


I loved your poem even without graphics LOL, as I am the "write a poem on a picture person here."  I saw what you were saying, and that is excellent writing.  Good luck Cindy.

     
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13 posted 2003-04-03 09:21 PM


Cindi, this is really a wonderfully soft poem, honoring Love that lasts.
Thank you for offering us this beauty for the book.
BTW, please post more often.

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14 posted 2003-04-03 09:24 PM


cpalmer
A lovely write, you have my vote.

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15 posted 2003-04-03 09:29 PM



Cindy!  You made it!  So glad to see you, finally!  HUGS....

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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16 posted 2003-04-03 10:20 PM


Hello Cindy

Beautiful words of love.  Here is a little something for you from me.

"To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides."

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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17 posted 2003-04-03 10:45 PM


The lasting quality of love...and comforting thing to hold onto and even more satisfying to be caught up in.  I can feel it very well.
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18 posted 2003-04-03 11:37 PM


Cindi,
An excellent choice. Passion...a topic I love! One for the book for sure.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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19 posted 2003-04-04 03:48 AM



Hi Cindy, I've missed you, glad to see you again.
Beautiful poem, definitely getting my vote.

Titia

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Kethry
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20 posted 2003-04-04 05:10 AM


Beautifully done,
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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21 posted 2003-04-04 09:05 AM


I absolutely love this one, of course I am voting!
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22 posted 2003-04-04 09:40 AM


Very hopeful.

Susan

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23 posted 2003-04-04 10:54 AM


(Big Smiles) I do love the passion expressed here in your poem and now more than ever do I look forward to enjoying some of those most 'hot' summer nights. A wonderful addition I think this will make to our book. Good job.

-Bob

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24 posted 2003-04-04 11:07 AM


I like the way this sounds, it would be a great poem for a reading, short but full of the right words.
Sandra

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25 posted 2003-04-04 11:36 AM


Cindi, this is gorgeous! A great addition to the book, for sure!
cpalmer
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26 posted 2003-04-04 03:55 PM


Thanks to all of you...I know I haven't been around much, but I appreciate all of your comments.  You are all so sweet and precious to me...I'll try to get on more often!
Hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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27 posted 2003-04-04 11:11 PM


This is beautiful. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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28 posted 2003-04-05 06:47 PM


Just a little nudge...
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29 posted 2003-04-06 06:24 PM



Sure...sneak one in without telling me..LOL.
Glad you finally submitted and glad I found it.
One of my favorites of yours.
Love ya,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Larry C
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30 posted 2003-04-08 01:02 AM


Vicky,
Her computer is broke! But she is excited about your response and the possibility of getting into the book...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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31 posted 2003-04-08 06:23 AM



Thanks, Larry.  I'm excited FOR her.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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32 posted 2003-04-10 12:39 PM


Congratulations!

Kellie_Cantrell
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33 posted 2003-04-11 11:25 PM


Very Pretty!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

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34 posted 2003-04-12 03:17 AM


great! loved this!
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35 posted 2003-04-12 03:17 AM


there is no box to vote?
Larry C
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36 posted 2003-04-12 06:11 PM


passing shadows there is no box because it is already in the book.

Hey everybody,
Cindi's computer is still broken. She turned it over to me last night for repairs. Hopefully she'll be back online this week!

She is so appreciative of everyone's responses and wishes she could thank you herself.  Thank you to all.

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