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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Slanting across the sand where rays of sunlight beam lying horizontally braced against the breeze. Brushing summer highlights that comb along the shore skirting underneath lying in the curvature. Rising with the tides fanning out across the sea basking warm in the rapport turning tan lines over intimately. ~*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Lori, I'm so delighted you submitted this, sweet friend, this is one of my favorites of yours because it always reminds me of the beach and how I long to move there and live there all the time so it can feel like a vacation everyday! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my sea-breeze vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This feels just perfect, Lori. I agree with Noah's comments. Sandra |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Quite a delectable scenario. The images are stirring and quietly passionate. And the lines just flow from tan to back again! Very nice. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Woohoo! I GET TO VOOOOOOOOOTE........ If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very nice!  ~Liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! YES!! YES!! Excellent submission for Reflections Lori!! ~Big hugs for this~  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Bravo!!! Lori's here!! You know that I love this, Lori..... there's the beach and there's your words... and here's my vote....  Heart Hugs, friend Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-28-2003 11:10 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Slanting across the sand where rays of sunlight beam lying horizontally braced against the breeze. Brushing summer highlights that comb along the shore ============================== As if I wasnt missing the ocean enough..you have to go and post this  So glad you joined in...we need a reflection of all the poets of exception in this book... Wonderful imagery and poetic employ of theme well done poetess Blue "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I think I'm going to cry! Thank you so much for putting up with me and my ways. I'm deeply grateful to you all! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'll vote for this poem any time.... crazy not to have it in the book. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
enjoyed hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was one of my personal favorites of your poems that I have had the pleasure of reading. Great choice for book submission! Warm hugs, EA |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
just a little arm twisting huh? *s glad you joined in hugsssss ~A~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Made me long for the beach. Joyce |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lori, Great poem. I enjoy the imagery. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm smiling. First, because I like your poem - it's beautiful. Second, because you submitted it. I'm SO glad!!!  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Voted hon...and what a beautiful one to vote on....lovely this, lovely you... LAuren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
I adore the beach and reading this poem I can almost hear it! Oh wait.. that's outside my door Great write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you, at least I can say I gave it my best shot! and Sharon, thank you for everything~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Mmm. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rising with the tides fanning out across the sea basking warm in the rapport turning tan lines over intimately. I've just come back from a 4 day break in sunny Queensland.. doing just that. sniff I'm cold. Glad you submitted this Blues.... it's beautiful and you have my vote |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This gets my vote NOW!!!!! Loved the way I heard the waves, felt the sun, and smelled the tanning lotion as I read!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mmm~ Thanks Mike Maree~ You're so sweet, thanks. I'm glad you felt the warmth. Always nice to see you Sunnyone~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's about time you got in here. *G* This is just beautiful... gets my click! *S* |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Very nice,Lori.You make me long for warm weather and the sea.Beautiful writing that receives my vote. Peace On Earth,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm slow! What a nice surprise to see you here. Thanks Suthern~ Glad it warmed you up a bit, and thanks for the read and the vote Street Heart~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Congratulations! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lori, Yea! Came back to reread this and noticed this will be included in Reflections. Great! Congratulations. Enjoy your talent. Very good! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
CONGRATULATIONS LORI!!! I KNEW IT!! You're in the book! ~Big Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sharon~ How do they say, I know that you know!!! Thank you for coming back Pat~ and for always being here. Darn near had me dancing on top of the table. Hugs Pat~ I wouldn't have believed it if I hadn't seen it with my own eyes. The wizard actually closed my book!!! Thanks Nancy~ |
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