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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2003-03-27 03:29 AM

Stardust Fun

One time I would’nt mind
Looking over some vast plain
That intersects the skies
And keeps the ground at bay.
It would flow like blood
Making everything live free,
True to itself, it’s nature
All things being equal.
I would feel the pulse
Of the stars and their antiquated
Messages that hold some far out
Distant meaning that has lost it’s way.
To be sure, I would touch
The nearest tree and wonder how old,
And ask if it understood me
Before realizing it was not listening.
So I would sit under it’s canopy
Using it for shade and shelter,
Hoping not to get struck by
Some idiotic sense of rightiousness.
And there, in the plains of existance,
There beyound my grasp,
Would be the field of stars
Laughing and playing as one.
Holding onto their secrets,
Like I hold onto my soul,
Complete with memories of old and Sun’s,
And their Stardust fun.

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

1 posted 2003-03-27 08:30 AM

Very interesting write.
Nicely presented.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-27 09:06 AM

Very nicely done Michael...and much enjoyed by this reader.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-03-27 09:26 AM

I enjoy poems that bring in the elements of nature--and this was no exception! Enjoyed!

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-03-27 10:04 AM

Michael, this is written so beautifully.
I enjoyed reading and you have my vote.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-27 08:30 PM

(sigh) Oh Michael, I love this, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I too love those fantasies and wish to live them too as I have yet to feel the gist of pixie dust! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

6 posted 2003-03-31 12:24 PM

Well done. A lovely picture.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2003-04-02 09:36 PM

great work. . . good to see your name here again. . .

this gets my vote. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2003-04-05 04:06 AM

Enjoyed the read very much!

Charisma

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

9 posted 2003-04-05 10:39 AM

michael-

beautiful writing, and exquisite imagery.
you really brought out the "stardust" in
this...it glitters m'friend!

take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

10 posted 2003-04-22 12:04 PM

Hi Michael,

Enjoyed the reading and there are some wonderful thoughts in this as well.

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

11 posted 2003-04-22 12:57 PM

interesting with good thoughts

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