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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-03-24 12:41 PM



Sitting here staring at the same four walls
Getting sick and tired of it all
Wondering where you are tonight
You left after our last fight
I know someday you'll come home
Because you don't like to be alone
Just like me.


~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

[This message has been edited by Ringo (03-24-2003 02:13 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-24 12:48 PM


Short and simple.  You're going to have to edit the post and check the "submit for the book" box above the text box.  That way people can actually vote for you.

Nicely done!  The shortness of this is going to give it a great chance of making the book.

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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2 posted 2003-03-24 02:37 PM




(big hugggsssssss) True love is that love that is capable of surmounting the fights and misunderstandings, dearest friend, I too hope all works out as you are deserving of this special joy! (sigh) You have my vote, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-03-24 02:40 PM


I like this, Ringo.  
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-03-25 07:47 PM


Brad - GET OUT OF MY HEAD  . . .  hehehe - this one stung - def gets my thumbs up
xxoo

SPIRIT
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5 posted 2003-03-25 11:35 PM


Short and to the point - very good.
kaile
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6 posted 2003-03-26 05:42 AM


I almost read this like a rap..

for its raw intensity

rosepetals25
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7 posted 2003-03-26 12:19 PM


Nice and short.. and to the point I think we have all been that position already.. being with someone for the sake of not being alone...

You have my vote...

And I have to say.. I love your quote.. John Lennon was amazing and Imagine is one of my favorite songs in the world

Tara


"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes


[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-26-2003 12:21 PM).]

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Saluting with misty eyes
8 posted 2003-03-26 12:35 PM


Thanks for the kind words.
Rose... I too (obviously) love John Lennon. Whenever things start getting too stressful, my mind always starts with this song... imagine that... a devout conservative republican quoting one of last century's greatest liberals... Whooda Thunk??

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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9 posted 2003-03-26 02:41 PM


voting
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10 posted 2003-03-26 04:29 PM


Ringo,
Yes, right to the heart. My vote is in!
SG

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11 posted 2003-03-26 04:53 PM


Well said and much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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12 posted 2003-03-26 04:55 PM


I enjoyed this very much... I think a lot of couples stay together for just such reasons. *S*
Lighthousebob
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13 posted 2003-03-28 09:32 PM


Direct and to the point without all the gooey mushy stuff. Good job.

-Bob

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14 posted 2003-03-29 09:04 AM


Simplistically perfect.
SPIRIT
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15 posted 2003-04-06 10:30 PM


Just in here
Bumpity bumping.


Joyce Johnson
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16 posted 2003-04-07 12:34 PM


Very basic truth here.  Joyce
littlewing
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17 posted 2003-04-07 05:11 AM


why isnt this in yet . . . . xxoo
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18 posted 2003-04-07 09:37 AM


You certainly captured those feelings that most of us has experienced at least once in a lifetime ~ a whole gamut of emotions.

Warm hugs,
EA

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19 posted 2003-04-08 06:29 PM


Really well written man,  its perfect, anything that displays solitude and explains it like you did makes it a perfect write, nice job
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