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The woman who searched for love

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arthur
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0 posted 03-24-2003 06:06 AM       View Profile for arthur   Email arthur   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for arthur


Searching for Love

There was a woman
And she searched for love
She was dilegent in her search
But could not find love
She asked other women
"Have you found love?"
Some had and were content
Others had not and also searched
"We have also looked for love,
but he is not here"
So she left and seached again
She searched in the hills and valleys
In the streets and market places
But she could not find love
And she sat by the road side
And she wept because she was alone
And without love
And a stranger came to her and said
"I have been looking for you everywhere!"
And she gathered up her things
And followed him

Arthur
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Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 03-24-2003 08:23 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Very interesting write Micheal..
Actually this has many layers...
Going back for another read,...
This is a keeper m'friend.
Hugs across the pond.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Flower
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2 posted 03-24-2003 10:34 AM       View Profile for Flower   Email Flower   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Flower

Interesting - reminded me a bit of a 'fairy tale'.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

KristieSue
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3 posted 03-24-2003 11:09 AM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

This was neat...

I agree that it had dual meanings...either religious, or a love story.  Great job!
Local Parasite
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4 posted 03-24-2003 12:40 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Like this... a cute, simple story, with a trailling conclusion.  Nicely done.

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 03-24-2003 02:27 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Yay! Oh Michael, this is lovely, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me smile and it made me smile to see the man take her by the hand, yay! (big hugggssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, yay for happy endings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SPIRIT
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6 posted 03-24-2003 02:53 PM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

What a lovely tale - very delightful and gets my vote.
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Justbleu
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8 posted 03-31-2003 12:00 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This was a really cool way to express a woman finding love!!!! Enjoyed!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

kaile
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9 posted 03-31-2003 11:17 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

this put a smile on my face
Pilgrimage
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10 posted 03-31-2003 04:44 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

I like this one. It's deceptively simple.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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She also finds love who only sits and waits.  Very nice.  Joyce
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon


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garysgirl
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13 posted 04-06-2003 02:23 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Very good ending.  

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


14 posted 04-07-2003 02:25 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Wonderful poem with a very important message! Enjoyed!

Warm hugs,
EA
Aimster
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15 posted 04-07-2003 08:36 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

great write...reminds me that love finds
you! take care.
amy

p.s. you got my vote.

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Justbleu
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16 posted 04-23-2003 11:24 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Bump......

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Lynda
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17 posted 05-24-2003 09:27 AM       View Profile for Lynda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynda

Are you still writing Arthur?
This poem sounds lost
Lynda
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