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DawnG
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0 posted 2003-03-22 03:28 AM


Images of You

My mind wanders to visions beyond daily sight
Times unknown to anyone but us
A surprise encounter taking my breath away
Memories for which there are no visuals.

Conversations where we are the only participants
Movie productions made no audience needed
Expressions unseen by naked eye
Resting forever in a heart on angel wings fly.

An all access pass to my life
Helping guide me through the pain
Feeling closer than ever before
Your touch a warm breeze lighting my spark.

Knowing you are by my side
Loving me today as much as yesterday
Forgiving my shortcomings seeing my strengths
Beautiful soul adding peacefulness to my day.

© Copyright 2003 Dawn - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2003-03-22 07:05 AM


Lovely images.. Lovely visages...
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2 posted 2003-03-22 07:30 AM


This is beautiful!

SG

Ina
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3 posted 2003-03-22 08:19 AM


This was a beautiful write, the images were also splendily placed and felt.
(ill vote for this)

Regina

"Despite all my rage I am still just a rat in a cage, Then someone will say what is lost can never be saved"
-Smashing Pumpkins

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-03-22 09:30 AM


Very very beautiful Dawn...
~Hugs and a vote~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

SPIRIT
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5 posted 2003-03-22 12:38 PM


Love this. My vote is cast.
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-03-22 02:26 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Dawn, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as in every picture there is more than a thousand words and only imagine the many more you will identify with each coming day! (kiss on cheek) Yay, you have my vote, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-22-2003 02:26 PM).]

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-22 02:28 PM


..."Your touch a warm breeze lighting my spark"---one of the many lines that I found very special...  

Peace & Love,
EA

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8 posted 2003-03-22 04:25 PM


lovely hon.....good to see you made a submission!


Lauren~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

Joyce Johnson
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9 posted 2003-03-23 02:31 AM


This gets my vote.  Joyce
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10 posted 2003-03-23 02:34 AM


stunningly beautiful  
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11 posted 2003-03-23 02:47 PM


Wonderful write Dawn! Gets my vote. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Munda
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12 posted 2003-03-24 07:20 AM


Great to see this poem as a booksubmission Dawn.
Local Parasite
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13 posted 2003-03-24 01:30 PM


Very nicely written, Dawn.  A treat from start to close.

Parasite

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14 posted 2003-03-24 02:02 PM


Lovely writing and I voted.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Street Heart
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15 posted 2003-03-24 03:02 PM


Beautiful,Dawn.You made me sigh,how dare you!

My vote.

Peace,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

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16 posted 2003-03-24 06:25 PM



Each stanza stands alone...
very nice reading...

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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17 posted 2003-03-26 01:02 PM


Beautiful images... beautiful write. *S*
LngJhnAg
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18 posted 2003-03-30 05:56 PM


Dawn - This sounds like love to me.  Nicely written.
garysgirl
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19 posted 2003-03-30 07:48 PM


This is beautiful, Dawn.
I love love poems.  

Hugs,
Ethel

Mark Bohannan
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20 posted 2003-04-01 06:30 PM


Everyone should have someone in their life that they can say as much for and you state it very well.  A very enjoyable read for sure.
WhiteRose
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21 posted 2003-04-02 09:44 AM


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Justbleu
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22 posted 2003-04-02 11:46 AM


Thank You....these are the feelings I feel of one of my best friends in the world whom I never see or talk to anymore but, somehow my heart knows what my mind cannot conceive possible!!!!  This is touching.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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