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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I danced with a reason For living tonite I was tired Worked all day Was trying hard to look forward to it I came home, opened the door And God...she was stunning Just like her mother And when I told her how Beautiful she looked Her shy smile, and the pure Proud joy, at my simple words Made my day so small And me her world and I Was filled with worth and love And we danced all night Clumsy and not caring In her beautiful gown With her laughing friends All angels And we laughed and did the Chicken dance, the YMCA And line danced like fools And all of the dads Forgot to look sheepish And I glimpsed for an instant The woman she was becoming So soon And I knew, I was the first man She loved I will never forget That night I danced With an angel . . . Had to resubmit, this one was lost with server problems the other day.Thank you my friends, my other 2 submissions made it into the book.I am very excited for what will be my first time in print and I am honored.This one I gift to Jessica, whom I danced with that nite. Jason |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!!! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Love this - happy to vote again. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
What a lovely dance....I am sure one you will both remember for a long time to come....very touching sir...  Lauren~ Here I am |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
A fun-loving, healthy father/child relationship is so precious and not to be taken for granted. Which you've expressed in spades! Lovely, simply lovely, Jason. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Jason.... Always have and always will....love dancing with my dad. This is great..thanks for reminding me. Best |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is really great....it makes me miss my Dad who recently passed away!!!! We were close!!! I voted too!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Simply a wonderful write. Thanks so much for this, it brought back very fond memories.  |
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leighsa Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74Oregon, United States Of America |
Jason, This is suck a beatiful writing of yours... I wish i had the same relationship with my dad i as your daughter has with you.... All my baest wishes, You have a very true heart and always remember we love you..... AshgieL |
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leighsa Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74Oregon, United States Of America |
OOOOps sorry about that jason i really believe this is a beatiful peice i want to hear more from you.... AshgieL  :'( It made me cry.... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Tragic to think we might have lost this..my vote again of course |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I missed this the first time around, glad I didn't miss it this time around. Made me think. Thanks. Dawn |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Thank you friends, for votes and comments.This one has come to mean alot to me as I have watched Jessicas growing excitement that this might make it in. Jason |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
I think this should DEFINATELY be included in the book!! I hope you won't mind if I print it out and share it with my husband and daughter. I think they may enjoy it as much as your Jessica does! And maybe, just possibly, it will help get my husband out to the Father/Daughter dance our young Rebecca wants him to attend. Thanks for this write Jason! Gets my vote! Tammy |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I am honored you want to share this, Tammy this was my first write of this type. thank you. Jason |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Bridgette, I am sorry for your loss, thank you for kind words. Jason |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
i am sure I voted for this before, but I am glad to do it again. Joyce |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
This is a portrait of such a fine relationship and I voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
now we can't disappoint Jessica, can we? my vote's in too |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad you resubmitted it... it's so beautiful and touching. *S* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason - this is just lovely - your daughter - a lucky young lady to have a father such as yourself - xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A lovely keepsake poem of a memorable moment in time... Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
And me her world and I Was filled with worth and love OMG - poems of children with their fathers touch me so deeply as i dreamed all my life of that honor & pleasure to find myself ever wanting outstanding write sir & thank-you for sharing your joy of fatherhood - you sound like an excellent Dad |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Just popped in to give you a bump back up. |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Elequently penned into words what every father must feel when their little girl is growing into a young woman. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, I honestly thought that I had voted for this. I guess that because I loved it so much in the Open Forum that I thought I had voted for it. I was going to just read it again and noticed that I didn't vote for it. I'm so sorry. Well, here I go now to vote.  *click* *click* There!  Hugs, Ethel  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Well I must admit like Ethel, I thought that I already voted for this beautiful loving dance. glad I came back here so my vote is in now Charisma |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Jason, I'm not one given to the sappier emotions, however this brought a HUGE lump to my throat as I have danced the same dances with my own Daughter, Autumn. Count one more vote to the total. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This fills me with regret for what should have been... Your write provokes strong feeling. Susan |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
I'm bumping again for you and your daughter hoping this gets in this book. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
:click click click click click click click click click click click click click click click click click click: hopefully all this clicking will do that one person one vote rule some justice? damn. :smirk: click click click click. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Jason, Yes, this is a very special poem. I enjoyed the sentiment and the love that you expressed between a father and his daughter. No question these words are from a loving father. SG My votes in. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
What a great, great poem. I have two daughters and I wish I had written this. This tugs at some real heart strings in me. Nicely done, Jason. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is so sweet Jason ~ It's been years and years, but I will never forget dancing with my Dad, brought back some cherished memories. Thanks for that. Bonnie |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
In the book! Lovely. Love reading all these great writes. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Wonderful Jason, so happy this one got in. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Thank you for all your votes! I wish you could all see how excited my little girl is about this getting in! Jason |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful, a daddy's girl she must be, always treasure her......................times get hard as they go into the teen years..........i know for sure |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
This brought tears to my eyes..lucky daughter you have. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Still sweet!!!!! |
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