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A Tender Moment

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Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


0 posted 03-15-2003 03:58 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Enchantress



I didn't tell you..
        because I couldn't find the words

        ...about the baby birds
        who flutter their wings inside my breast
        when you hold my head
                           and let it rest
       against your heart.


© Copyright 2003 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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as good as ever
arthur
MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...


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Ahhh, Nancy...  tenderness as only you know how to convey.  I love the "baby birds" image.  You have my vote -- the world needs so much more of THIS!  ...especially in these times...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

SPIRIT
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I have but one word

EXQUISITE

and yes! I am shouting it.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


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'Tis a
and sure to be in book form...
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon


5 posted 03-15-2003 04:06 PM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

This is beautiful Nancy, a wonderful little write. It surely gets my vote.
scorpio
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right...there


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This is wonderful expression of love...you have captured the feelings and found the right words and images to express it...well done my Lady..

        

believe in what your heart feels...

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


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Nancy - this is most precious and should be in the book, my vote is in...

BC
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8 posted 03-15-2003 04:28 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

This is so pretty, Nancy. I love it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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(smiles) Yay! Oh Nancy, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I loooovvveeee baby birds, they are so adorable and that is only one of millions of reasons I love spring most of all of any time of the year, when all the new life is born! (kiss on cheek) This must be in the book so I cast my sparrow-chirping vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Flower
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10 posted 03-15-2003 04:42 PM       View Profile for Flower   Email Flower   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Flower

Such beauty in words, I wish I could be so inspired. Voted.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Chrissypooh
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11 posted 03-15-2003 05:54 PM       View Profile for Chrissypooh   Email Chrissypooh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chrissypooh

This is beautiful Nancy, a wonderful little write!
Christine
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So very sweet!  Joyce
SimplyGold
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Enchantress,

I love this. I really, really do. I like short poems that hit you and say so much.
This one does just that. Beautiful!

SG
Nightshade
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just out of reach


14 posted 03-15-2003 07:34 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Nancylee - of course this gets my vote. Tender and loving. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

*Stubby*
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beautiful so very nice xoxoxoxoxo
Auguste
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By the sea


16 posted 03-15-2003 09:52 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

So much said with so few words and remarkable.   You get my vote, Nancy. Hugsss
aries_luv_ppl
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lovely

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

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In Your Poetic Mind


18 posted 03-15-2003 10:25 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

this is so amazing Nancy~
very touching, yet softly sensual.....


Lauren~

Here I am
Running after dreams ~
I made it through another lonely night
Thinking of you
I know I should be strong
I just can’t say ~goodbye~(LR)

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19 posted 03-15-2003 10:28 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

yep...what everyone said
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise


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My dear, only you can write of such sensual and tender love.

This gets a vote from me.

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

kaile
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you are the queen of brevity
Kellie_Cantrell
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22 posted 03-16-2003 02:25 PM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

Beautiful!!!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling


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Short and beautiful!
Jason
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This is precious!

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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