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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
 Two years seems like fifty Even the settled dust vies for the time between grey temples and illusionist dreams Memories upon the heart cling to the mind Like dew to grass While scattered chronologies confuse the year, the hour, and the day Where did we go? And where have I been? Scattered amongst the many feelings drifting with the wind Shall the day pass tonight without a mere thought? Perhaps a different dawn A crystal shadow to beckon to an unforgiving scar, Will one day capture the wind Explain these feelings in a whisper Should another pebble Be cast upon a frozen pond Church bells ring once again at five o'clock in a small town Where time has no limit Days pass without a glance...into tomorrow You shall discover me there Still standing, frozen in place as if...I never left |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, I hope all is alright as in love nothing ever relocates and the heart is always that reservoir where all the memories and smiles are collectively immersed! (sigh) This earns my vote, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Jiminy! Another lovely write and picture perfect. My vote happily cast. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Splendid, it gets my vote! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dennis...this is worth a reread... as a  ... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, this is absolutely beautiful. You have my vote. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Good Write! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Will one day capture the wind Explain these feelings in a whisper What a absolutely delightful poem, and it speaks to so many that will indeed be waiting. Vote's in! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I liked this poem of yours very much! You offered up a feast for the eyes and soul... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dennis...this is fantastic! Gets my vote! ~Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow!!!! This flows beautifully!!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (03-19-2003 08:25 PM).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hauntingly somber... You have my vote, for sure. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
dhicks03 - this writing did leave an impression on me, excellent write. Has my vote... BC |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice. My vote is in. Joyce |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I don't even know what to say to this... but I am definitely going to be reading this several more times. Wow, this is strong. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dennis, Wonderful poetry here, very much enjoyed. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Very moving. The longing and loneliness almost palpable. May your hurtling heart soon heal completely... Love & Light, EA |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very touching write,,,, |
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