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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Eagle's Flight O'er windswept ridge, soar on high Caught far above, in tear blue sky Scantly disguised, despair exudes No peace, no love, just solitude Respite amid the broken gums Once pristine land, frigid river runs The motley greys and ghostly blues They bask aloud in nature's hue Sallowed existence, might he live Yet asking now, Who's to forgive? What of the future, dare he to die And questions still, Will the Eagle fly? [This message has been edited by EagleOne (03-14-2003 09:53 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~A hug and a vote~  ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) YES!!! The eagle WILL fly on, for YOU are the eagle that will soar with the true colors of freedom and the wind beneath your wings is filled with grace! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful and earns my uplifting vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the rhythm in this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love eagles and I love this poem  "Love makes the world go around" |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I too am very fond of eagles, and very fond of this poem. It gets my vote dear friend.  |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Wow! very nice - happily cast my vote for this. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Will he live and fly indeed, and I took this poem two ways, and I trust both will carry on for a long time. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Truth be known I’d take the hugs over the votes any day, glad you liked. Thank you. |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Enjoyed this. Nicely rhymed and expressed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wonderful write! ~ And may the eagle forever fly free! Springtime hugs, Earth Angel [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-17-2003 01:29 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The eagle and the eagle symbol will live forever. Joyce |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
The eagle will indeed fly  Love the flow of this. voting. Maree |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
The 'flows' have it! Yes, I like. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
'No peace, no love, just solitude.' Such is similar to what I seek some days...yet others I wonder how they can survive up there, so far from everything, in such a cold, lonely place. Or perhaps we are wrong, and they are warmer than we...perhaps that's why they fly so high. Closer to the sun. Blessed Be Thee, Stephanie Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is so lovely, what a powerful bird this is, the meaning behind his name is as well....thank you for the "flight" Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
No doubt in my mind, this Eagle will always fly! Great work, Eddie. All writing comes |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
The Eagle always finds a way to fly. Now.. if he could only vote. Guess I'll have to do it for him. Tammy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
just mothy me back again  |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Beautiful poem and strong message of hope that our Nation's bird will always live on as a symbol of our great nation. Dawn |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I wish we could answer the questions in your last verse knowing there'd be a happy ending. *S* I thought I'd voted for this before... making sure I do now! *S* Excellent work! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Sallowed existence, might he live Yet asking now, Who's to forgive? What of the future, dare he to die And questions still, Will the Eagle fly? Yes...the eagle will always fly. Wonderful and gets my vote :-) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Well done  *votes* |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
The eagle will always fly on.  sky Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I'm voting for this. Love the meter, the rhyme and the image. |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
A soaring and spirit filled poem. Uplifting, earnest and noble. Very well done my friend. Got my vote. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I thank you all for adding your thoughts, take care! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Your poetry has been accepted go sign your publishing agreement!!!!! Bridgette |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
EagleOne...May the Eagle always fly free. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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