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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 2003-03-14 10:06 AM





Crazy Love (3/4/03)

I have bled scarlet words
Of woe
For you

I have swallowed back
Boulder sized rocks of humiliation
For you

I have beat fist against chest
Trying to start a dying heart
Because of you

I have self-mutilated
My now weeping soul
Because of you

I have broken every nail
Trying to scratch all traces of you
From my skin
To rid myself of you

And now, I hand you my
Heart, soul, and sanity
You own them all….
Now love me


[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (03-14-2003 11:32 AM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-03-14 10:15 AM


yes..enjoyed then..and do now..

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (03-14-2003 04:57 PM).]

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-03-14 10:22 AM


Thank you!  It got losteded..had to repost the repost.  Geez that is too complicated for my simple mind..

Susan

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3 posted 2003-03-14 10:47 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Is that not too much to ask? (sad sigh) I am glad you got this back up so I can again vote it in, forgiveness is a central part of love and if he truly has the heart he can console all he afflicted upon your heart, I send many angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Street Heart
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4 posted 2003-03-14 11:01 AM


Wow! Such power in there with so few words.
Raw emotion stated directly and eloquently.
Must say that I truly relate.

Peace,Geoffrey

P.S.I wanted to vote,but saw nothing to click
for the vote.Perhaps get in contact with Ron to change that for I'd like to see this in the book.

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-03-14 11:33 AM


All fixed, sorry I am slow today!

Susan

Street Heart
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6 posted 2003-03-14 12:52 PM


VOTE!   
DawnG
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7 posted 2003-03-14 04:22 PM


Very beautiful.

                   Dawn

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Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2003-03-14 04:42 PM


I'll vote for this.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (03-14-2003 04:42 PM).]

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9 posted 2003-03-14 07:42 PM


YES!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-03-15 12:12 PM


I liked this as well this time as before when I read......
WhiteRose
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11 posted 2003-03-15 10:58 AM


Wow, I really like this. Very nicely done.
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12 posted 2003-03-16 03:31 AM


Pretty powerful, I tend to hold back a bit for rainy days.

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2003-03-18 01:35 PM


came back to vote again for this gem of pen

  

If I am right ... if I can be ...
constant and faithful ... you'll find me

TC

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14 posted 2003-03-18 01:44 PM


yes...worth a vote for sure... if for no otehr reasin than the ending being one to not only tie the thought together but to add a bit of a twist to it...


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15 posted 2003-03-18 01:55 PM


After all that you have given, you deserved to be loved!---and very well at that!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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16 posted 2003-03-19 09:55 AM


Very good!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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17 posted 2003-03-20 03:30 PM


I have broken every nail
Trying to scratch all traces of you
From my skin
To rid myself of you

Oh my... this is raw... and excellent!! *S*

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18 posted 2003-03-20 03:34 PM


what one will do to fight for love ;-)

incredibly passionate....I'll vote!

Charisma
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19 posted 2003-03-23 04:23 AM


Cast my vote too

Charisma

sweetwater
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20 posted 2003-03-23 04:29 AM


If I didn't vote for this the first time, I don't know what's wrong with me! Loved it!
Sunshine
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21 posted 2003-03-23 07:15 AM



Good job, Susan!

Susan Caldwell
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22 posted 2003-03-24 12:34 PM


Thank you!

[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (03-24-2003 12:35 PM).]

littlewing
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23 posted 2003-03-25 08:16 PM


God - Sue - this powerful - I thought I had read this already - *I swear I am losing it* - been there - still am . . . xxoo  
Brad Majors
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24 posted 2003-04-29 04:39 PM


Awesome!
wings of the moon
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25 posted 2003-04-29 05:45 PM


wow!
breathtaking, the emotion just came right off the screen and hit me!
A very powerful piece!
well done, it is beautifully said...

love,
Claire

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

waldopepper
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26 posted 2003-04-29 10:45 PM


A desperate and reckless confession.  Hard to dismiss and that makes it all the more true.  Stunning.
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