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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 03-14-2003 10:06 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Susan Caldwell




Crazy Love (3/4/03)

I have bled scarlet words
Of woe
For you

I have swallowed back
Boulder sized rocks of humiliation
For you

I have beat fist against chest
Trying to start a dying heart
Because of you

I have self-mutilated
My now weeping soul
Because of you

I have broken every nail
Trying to scratch all traces of you
From my skin
To rid myself of you

And now, I hand you my
Heart, soul, and sanity
You own them all….
Now love me


[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (03-14-2003 11:32 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Susan Caldwell - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 03-14-2003 10:15 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

yes..enjoyed then..and do now..

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (03-14-2003 04:57 PM).]

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 03-14-2003 10:22 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Thank you!  It got losteded..had to repost the repost.  Geez that is too complicated for my simple mind..

Susan
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3 posted 03-14-2003 10:47 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(big hugggssssssss) Is that not too much to ask? (sad sigh) I am glad you got this back up so I can again vote it in, forgiveness is a central part of love and if he truly has the heart he can console all he afflicted upon your heart, I send many angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Street Heart
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4 posted 03-14-2003 11:01 AM       View Profile for Street Heart   Email Street Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Street Heart

Wow! Such power in there with so few words.
Raw emotion stated directly and eloquently.
Must say that I truly relate.

Peace,Geoffrey

P.S.I wanted to vote,but saw nothing to click
for the vote.Perhaps get in contact with Ron to change that for I'd like to see this in the book.

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 03-14-2003 11:33 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

All fixed, sorry I am slow today!

Susan
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6 posted 03-14-2003 12:52 PM       View Profile for Street Heart   Email Street Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Street Heart

VOTE!   
DawnG
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Very beautiful.

                   Dawn

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I'll vote for this.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (03-14-2003 04:42 PM).]

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9 posted 03-14-2003 07:42 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

YES!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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10 posted 03-15-2003 12:12 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

I liked this as well this time as before when I read......
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11 posted 03-15-2003 10:58 AM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

Wow, I really like this. Very nicely done.
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12 posted 03-16-2003 03:31 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Pretty powerful, I tend to hold back a bit for rainy days.

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

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13 posted 03-18-2003 01:35 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

came back to vote again for this gem of pen

  

If I am right ... if I can be ...
constant and faithful ... you'll find me

TC

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14 posted 03-18-2003 01:44 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

yes...worth a vote for sure... if for no otehr reasin than the ending being one to not only tie the thought together but to add a bit of a twist to it...

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After all that you have given, you deserved to be loved!---and very well at that!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel
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16 posted 03-19-2003 09:55 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Very good!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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17 posted 03-20-2003 03:30 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I have broken every nail
Trying to scratch all traces of you
From my skin
To rid myself of you

Oh my... this is raw... and excellent!! *S*
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18 posted 03-20-2003 03:34 PM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

what one will do to fight for love ;-)

incredibly passionate....I'll vote!
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19 posted 03-23-2003 04:23 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Cast my vote too

Charisma
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If I didn't vote for this the first time, I don't know what's wrong with me! Loved it!
Sunshine
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Good job, Susan!
Susan Caldwell
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Thank you!

[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (03-24-2003 12:35 PM).]

littlewing
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God - Sue - this powerful - I thought I had read this already - *I swear I am losing it* - been there - still am . . . xxoo  
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24 posted 04-29-2003 04:39 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

Awesome!
 
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