Good Lord,Patrick,do you know me? If not,you must be psychic! You have no idea how much I am there within your work.I bet we could talk volumes together,you and I.You have written such an eloquently insightful free
verse here.A "keeper" for me and you have my vote.If this is autobiographical,I sincerely hope that you find some type of healing.Man,
I'm telling you...your references to duplicity,bitterness,and so on...goodness,
if you only knew.The effects of betrayal and abandonment can last forever.I am not telling you this to have you reply,but read my offering in the "Corner Pub" called
"9/11/2000".That is what happened to me as the "jet" of betrayal crashed into the "tower" of my belief,trust,life.Still healing and trying to turn disaster into good.Wishing you better days and better Love.
Peace On Earth,Geoffrey
If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.
Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963