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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Pages I flipped through the pages of him swimming words of liquid language floating on this tide I saw myself he had seen my touch in a way that few men do, but he knew it it warmed and chipped at him being held at arms length with fingertips begging begging it was there in letters flow that I saw a spring gushing from rock where he had touched in miracle of joy the pain in longing deeper than yellow fire the pulling, the pushing of a heart and it was a sigh breathing freely this started out so innocently like a wind tapping at windows to howling and moaning outside the house and I am here and I am there in the shadows touching his heart [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (03-12-2003 06:28 AM).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Ahhh, so many moving images here. I like it lots. *s |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Helen, yep, there sure was a lot of bacon and eggs frying on the server this morning, but now I am happy to find this again so I can re-vote! (big hugggssssss) Each day comes a new chapter to the book of love and illustrations drawn in courtesy of the #1 fan, yay, God Bless You, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed the howling and moaning wind imagery, the calling and pleading thoughts. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
re-vote! *wink* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, me too!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yep |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
re-voting this is such a wonderful example of your work, which I thoroughly enjoy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady You got me with this one. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - my vote is in... BC |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful write.... and you always will be there forever ~~ Connie ~~ [This message has been edited by Zinsser (03-14-2003 03:15 PM).] |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very beautiful write.  Dawn |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A wonderful write. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi 1slick_lady, Enjoyed very much and loved your choise of words. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Wow ... what a fantastic piece for the book I hope it makes it in you have my vote |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Great emotional piece. Joyce |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WOW...the imagery and emotion in this is simply amazing! I hope you that this gets put in the book! it would make such a great submission. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, You know you have a way that some how gets deep inside of me that I just can't resist. Can I start a fan club?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
well larry you MUST be my # 1 fan and one with wings...how can i go wrong?....smooch...helen |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
1slick_lady, i enjoyed this very much, i especially liked the ending. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
very well done Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, t'is a fine bit of Helen here. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
click |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
Voting - thank you. very well done!!!! Just a Junkie |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi Hi, Lady. Missing you and your wonderful work these days. I rarely get in here. This is beyond lovely as always. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Very beautiful - voting- I hop eit helps.. God bless you Thanx - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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