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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Little Star Little star up in the nighttime sky, Your brillance always catches my eye, A star to guide the shepards to, A new baby born, a life so true. Little star millions of years old, In your grasp, many stories you hold, A chance I'd give to learn the past, New lives began in a land so vast. Little star just out of human reach, In your wisdom many lessons you teach, Shining upon a world so grand, From prosperous cities, to small farm land. Wishing upon the same little star, You suddenly don't seem quite so far, Seeing you, brings mankind peace, And for a moment, distances decrease. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Dawn!! ~Hugs~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed this little shining star! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
"Little star millions of years old, In your grasp, many stories you hold," I love that you make the star active. Yes...If only it could talk, so many interesting stories it would relate. Well writ, Dawn. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Dawn, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful poems do, always reach for the stars and they are bound to shine forever for you, God Bless You, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I still like this Dawn, so you get my vote again!  Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Enjoyed the read very much  Charisma |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dawn, I also love this again....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I can't tell you how many times I just stare at stars..they seem like magic to me. I'm voting now!!  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
that was sweet... if stars could talk... voting ;-) KS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely - gets my vote. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
voting for this one. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (03-14-2003 04:35 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Wishing upon the same little star, You suddenly don't seem quite so far, Seeing you, brings mankind peace, And for a moment, distances decrease. Yes! It gets my vote. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Thank you all for your support and warm kind words on my poem. I have several friends and family throughout the world and this poem just helps me to feel a little bit closer to them. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Little Star indeed - We get closer and closer to the stars every day...  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh yes....the little stars....I think we all love them so!!!!! Wonderful!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your little star poem twinkles! Springtime hugs, EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
came back to vote again for this gem of pen. |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
 EnjoyedTammy |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
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