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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-02-23 07:56 PM



So I guess we are not talking
That solves everything, right?
I got mad and you got quiet
and we're both too stubborn to speak

I mean what I said
you really do not listen
Because everything you say
is so much more important

I am tired of repeating
things so you'll remember
can't you listen to me just once
or am I not that important

You say that we've grown closer
that I'm your confidant
make that a two-way thing please
so we get back to normal

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1 posted 2003-02-23 09:04 PM


I love this. So it gets my vote.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-24 12:16 PM


Ouch! Right between the eyes!

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Jason Lyle
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3 posted 2003-02-24 12:23 PM


Give this write to him! Nice poem and to the point.
Jason

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4 posted 2003-02-24 02:38 AM


WOW! This is a powerful plea for someone to listen. And of course you are right, communication is a two-way street that relationships must travel on to succeed.
Hope he heard you and listened.
Welcome to Passions!

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5 posted 2003-02-24 06:10 AM


powerful is right...

welcome to passions...

regards,
sudhir

KristieSue
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6 posted 2003-02-24 09:02 AM


Thanks :-)  Would rather not had to write it...
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7 posted 2003-02-24 09:22 AM


I like your rant (err, poem), but I had to read it three times because I got distracted and missed what you were saying - lol.  It's good seeing you write again.
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8 posted 2003-02-24 09:28 AM


"...I am tired of repeating
things so you'll remember..."

I know this is sooo frustrating!
Nicely said.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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9 posted 2003-02-24 09:58 AM


I'm sorry... did you say something? Could you repeat that for me please?

nicely done...

KristieSue
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10 posted 2003-02-24 10:11 AM


Mike!!!!!!!!  :-)

My rant is "Dear 'You'" which I wrote yesterday too LOL  I was not in a good mood.  Thanks for the reads!

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11 posted 2003-02-24 10:17 AM


Kristie Sue, you tell 'em, girl....

Even though we'd rather not, we have to sometimes, don't we??

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-24-2003 10:22 AM).]

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12 posted 2003-02-24 07:28 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristie, yes, communication must have two directions in any circumstance, there must be no culdesacs or No Way Outs as one must listen to appreciate one you truly love! (sigh) Here's wishing the best for you, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2003-02-24 07:46 PM


expressed well

~Every girl has a dream within.

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14 posted 2003-02-26 08:48 PM


Nice rant!

Did it help?

Ed

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15 posted 2003-02-26 08:52 PM


it helped me LOL
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