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Charisma
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0 posted 2003-02-23 05:00 AM


Timeless is the wind
When it blows north, east, south or west
Boundless is the sky
Even when she's been cloudly dressed
Her beams of love and light
Will sooth your restless soul
When she reaches out to you
Gentle light beams within console

Timeless is your voice
Along with stream of wind
Struggling anguish within
Darken bittersweet mind
Threshold of the night
Don't lock the inner whole
Among your shadows of sighs
I'll comfort your tortured soul

Don't be afraid to walk
Don't ask the reason why
'Cause timeless is the wind
And time is passing by

Goodbye is not forever
Forever is no more
Twined with timeless borders
Footprints across the shore
Two pair side by side
There were you walked alone
Someone holding you tight
Seems your guardian angel
Wraps you with wings so light

Goodbye is not forever
Forever is no more
And timeless is the wind
Along borders of love
Unbounded as the sky
When time passes by




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Munda
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1 posted 2003-02-23 07:22 AM


Charisma, what an amazing and wonderful poem. Bravo girl!
Chanson
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2 posted 2003-02-23 07:58 AM


Yours is the first poem
of the morning that I am
reading and it's molding
the start of my day
with a smile and
warmth. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2003-02-23 08:42 AM


Charisma; How this poem flows and captures the timeless truth of unconditional love. Your use of nature enhances the beauty of your lovely words. Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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4 posted 2003-02-23 09:48 AM


This kind of poetry is truly "Timeless".
It made me sigh with its whisperings  of love and nature. Simply beautiful...

Warm morning hugs,
Earth Angel

P.S. Your photo is absolutely adorable. Looks like you are a true "flower child"!

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5 posted 2003-02-23 09:51 AM



"Goodbye is not forever
Forever is no more
Twined with timeless borders
Footprints across the shore"

I like the way you offered us this piece of timeless truth.
And in case I never mentioned it before, I really like that picture of you!

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6 posted 2003-02-23 11:48 AM


I love this, especially "Good bye is not forever".
I hope that it's true.
Hugs
Sandra

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7 posted 2003-02-23 12:00 PM


'Timeless is your voice
Along with stream of wind
Struggling anguish within
Darken bittersweet mind
Threshold of the night
Don't lock the inner whole
Among your shadows of sighs
I'll comfort your tortured soul'

A write of support and sincerity.  Liked this a lot Charisma!  Especially the verse I quoted.  

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8 posted 2003-02-23 12:05 PM


this is a very beautiful poem for book submission.....   

Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-02-23 01:55 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Charisma, this is sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too just love your picture as we are all flower children and you have a golden heart of a flower! (kiss on cheek) May the winds of love always sing to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-23-2003 01:57 PM).]

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10 posted 2003-02-23 04:40 PM


Beautiful...simply beautiful!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2003-02-23 06:05 PM



I just loved it.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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12 posted 2003-02-23 07:07 PM


Very beautiful, Charisma!
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13 posted 2003-02-24 01:35 AM


Wonderful.....I just love this!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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14 posted 2003-02-24 01:48 AM



Charisma, my friend, I just LOVE reading your poetry.
This is so softly and beautifully penned.
Wonderfully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Nan
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15 posted 2003-02-24 07:13 AM


"Timeless" is your lovely poem, Charisma...
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16 posted 2003-02-24 10:52 AM


Timeless...you've got the title right for this poem is
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17 posted 2003-02-24 04:46 PM


Timeless is the wind
When it blows north, east, south or west
Boundless is the sky
Even when she's been cloudly dressed
Her beams of love and light
Will sooth your restless soul
When she reaches out to you
Gentle light beams within console

Timeless is your voice
Along with stream of wind
Struggling anguish within
Darken bittersweet mind
Threshold of the night
Don't lock the inner whole
Among your shadows of sighs
I'll comfort your tortured soul

==================================

Such pretty poetic ponderings...
a lovely write of spirit and heart poetess Charisma!!

oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ...
oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang
;)

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18 posted 2003-02-24 08:08 PM


Yes, Charisma, this is VERY good...voting!!
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19 posted 2003-02-24 10:13 PM


A real keepsake this poem is dearPoetFriend Charisma...
Hugs2u...
*~coco~*

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20 posted 2003-02-24 11:51 PM


Very vote worthy.  Joyce
Elizabeth Santos
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21 posted 2003-02-26 06:54 AM


Very beautiful poem!
A vote for poetic pleasure
Liz

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22 posted 2003-02-26 09:37 AM


My vote for this, too.

It reads like one is singing a love song..hummmm.

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23 posted 2003-02-26 10:21 AM


How wonderfully you captured the timeless quality of love and life, my friend!!  A definite front-runner for our book!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

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24 posted 2003-02-26 10:39 AM



Charisma,

I love this, and is indeed timeless.


Pat

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        "Desiderata"

Charisma
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25 posted 2003-02-27 06:16 PM


My sincere thanks for everyone and all for  reading and for your kind comments on my poem...... love you´all

Charisma

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26 posted 2003-02-27 07:32 PM


enjoyed
Bill Charles
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27 posted 2003-02-27 09:15 PM


Charisma - what can I say about a beautiful writer of these words. My vote is cast...

BC

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28 posted 2003-03-01 06:35 PM


good bye is not forever...*s enjoyed the feelings expressed
M

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29 posted 2003-03-08 04:53 PM


Charisma - catching up here, and after reading your poem I don't think you could have picked a more appropriate title for it.  It was beautiful!

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

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30 posted 2003-03-09 10:00 PM


Some day, some day, I will be able to write this subject as well as you do. Maybe.
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31 posted 2003-03-17 08:02 PM


Bump......
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32 posted 2003-03-17 09:16 PM


Charming! Gets my vote.
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