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dhicks03
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0 posted 02-23-2003 01:25 AM       View Profile for dhicks03   Email dhicks03   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit dhicks03's Home Page   View IP for dhicks03


Forgone conclusions
present
Love,
heaven sent,
departed


Was that sorry on my breath?
Somehow,
You knew I couldn't stay


Love
Yes love
Taste bitter when it's gone


Pieces of me
Scattered about
Swept away
In silver lined reflections


Yes Sunshine
It was so very special
So very true
Hold on, hold on
Staring at the wall...I'm almost...gone


2002 Dennis Hicks
© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-23-2003 01:29 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(big hugggsssssss) Oh Dennis, this is so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now a new love has touched your heart that tastes as sweet as sugar! (sigh) I send angel hugs and my vote your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 02-23-2003 08:05 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

I know of which you write...and you've written it so profoundly from the heart...I love your style...Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Chanson
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3 posted 02-23-2003 08:22 AM       View Profile for Chanson   Email Chanson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chanson

I like the
combination of
seriousness and
whimsy. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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4 posted 02-23-2003 10:10 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Our Sunshine certainly does get around, doesn't she? tehe

Moving little write with lots of emotion--up, down and all around!

Warm morning hugs,
Earth Angel
dgvarner
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5 posted 02-23-2003 10:12 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

Love does, indeed, taste bitter when it's gone...

nicely written..

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge

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6 posted 02-23-2003 12:12 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Dennis, though sad, this is beautiful....book? Yes...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-23-2003 12:13 PM).]

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I think I love everything you write....
Enchantress
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8 posted 02-23-2003 04:28 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

This...is exquistie!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 02-23-2003 04:31 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

liked this one a lot...

regards,
sudhir
Titia Geertman
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WOW you got my vote for sure, lovely poem

Titia

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Nan
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11 posted 02-25-2003 08:24 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Well written, yet bittersweet...
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Lovely. Voted.
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In Your Poetic Mind


13 posted 03-17-2003 04:43 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Pieces of me
Scattered about
Swept away
In silver lined reflections''


I found this so powerful....I have felt this too many times....only to notice the reflection....NICE!!


~~~~~~~~~
Lauren~


I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

Earth Angel
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Glad to see that this was written in 2002 and that you're still around! That was full of sadness and desolation! A real heart-tugger.

Warm Irish hugs,
Earth Angel
dhicks03
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15 posted 03-17-2003 04:57 PM       View Profile for dhicks03   Email dhicks03   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhicks03's Home Page   View IP for dhicks03

Thank you kind people for your warm words. I appreciate them immensly!
garysgirl
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17 posted 04-08-2003 02:38 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I like your formatting of this and also the bittersweetness of the poem, and sorry I missed it.

     
To be hugged by a friend is wealth beyond words.

Mon Cherie
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18 posted 05-03-2003 11:49 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

This is so bittersweet... Love found, yet parted soon... Thanks for sharing..

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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20 posted 05-11-2003 08:22 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Lovely!

Charisma
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